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Title: BlackTalons - Real Time Tactics Post by: Bambino2012 on May 28, 2013, 08:21:14 AM Hey guys,
Just announcing our new game, BlackTalons, a real time tactical game. Check it out !! http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=fXUsg9Kk3sI (http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=fXUsg9Kk3sI) Title: Re: BlackTalons - Real Time Tactics Post by: EdBartley on May 30, 2013, 05:57:11 AM That looks pretty cool. I like dark and gritty!
Title: Re: BlackTalons - Real Time Tactics Post by: starsrift on May 31, 2013, 01:25:26 AM Your game looks like the kind of game I'd play. I liked the gameplay shots.
Your video is goddamn awful. 40 seconds of something so dark that it's impossible to make out - a flythrough of something? - until I suddenly break into a nice gameplay shot of a bright, orange desert. Are your textures of your flythrough of whatever it is so bad you really can't expose them to light? Maybe you should ramp your tension up with something else or take a different approach with the video. Not only that, but you open up with a little logo animation serve that explicitly states the developer name, and then follow up with "camel 101 presents" literally five seconds later. Literally five seconds. I counted. If you want to keep the "camel 101 presents" bit as a nice start to your interspersing-grimdark-tense text blurbs, stick your logo animation at the end or get rid of it altogether. Unless you want to project the feeling that you're a huge uncaring, gamers-are-stupid-attitude publisher/developer that insists on sticking their logo on the front of whatever thing they put out, like EA. If you ignore the visuals, the video is quite nice. The pacing is good, and the music suits. If you ignore the visuals of the video. |