Oh i agree mostly with you. Thanks for review!

Here is the demo of my game "FATIGUE" http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/616683
It was supposed to show a little from the story by narrations, but thanks to voice actor
suddenly not cooperating, i haven't shown any of the story, except 2 lines from him.
I need to get in the 8th place in this competition: http://www.newgrounds.com/collection/construct2touchjam , but currently im the 21st out of 80 submissions. If i don't make it to the 8th i won't be able to get the Game engine's license.
Please help me guys or at least tell me some feedback. Oh the game is partly ment for touch devices, that's why there are buttons on screen and the screen has weird resolution. I had no time to make nice menu or ending screen. Music by Adam Beligard.

Link to the indieDB page: www.indiedb.com/games/fatigue
Link to the youtube channel: www.youtube.com/mrecopipe

NEW VIDEO: http://youtu.be/9jxREjW19A8

I'm making an odd game with Construct 2.
It is like a puzzle, platformer game with weird, crazy, blurred out story that is told through artworks in background and narration and it is black and white.
I can't spoil the story by telling you all about it, but it is
really fun and hard at the same time, in one word, challenging.
I've dedicated past week in making it and it's still counting.
What am in concerned about is- How should i get money for Construct 2 license(119.00$)?
Currently i'm thinking about IndieGoGo. Anyways, here's few recent pics and one old video. Please leave your comments on what and how should i improve in it. Thanks!



http://youtu.be/j_YwxQ-IA0g(Note, the video is outdated)
You can follow game's updates here:http://www.ecopipe.tumblr.com