I think everything's fine visually. Removing the scanlines would probably result it the graphics looking overly clean, and if cyberpunk is your intention, that would be kind of a problem.

My only real complaint is Adam Jensen's bad haircut and that you've given him a bit of a baby face. Beef up that jaw.

I've been making games for quite a while now, but it's still nothing more than a hobby. My current love interest is Lua and what I've mostly been working on this past year is improving my artistic abilities.

Introductions aren't anywhere near as fun as making video games.