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[Relix]

Would this work:


25 % smaller than the original, would allow me to use the already made sprites - just need to retouch them. It'd be easier to make new sprites, maybe.

[Kevin]

New pixels

This is improving drastically each time you post. Here's my take on the new one:


Contrast was the big issue here. The outline on the trees was bugging me because it seems to be lighter than the darkest bit of shading.

25 % smaller than the original, would allow me to use the already made sprites - just need to retouch them. It'd be easier to make new sprites, maybe.

The only problem I see here is that this is essentially still the same style. Smaller can make some things easier, but it can make other things harder (like animation). If it was me, I'd simplify. Something like this...

...which is mostly blobs of colour and simple forms. This particular sprite might look a little too Cave Story, but the principal stands. The more simplistic the style, the easier it is to churn out sprites quickly. Also as resolution decreases so does readability of details. Emphasizing basic forms rather than trying to make things overly complex helps to keep things looking clean and sharp.

[RotateMe]

Kevin: Thanks for the reply! Now that you mentioned the tree outline I can't unsee it, somehow the more I look at it the less I like the trunks. Having given it an hour of thought or so and reading upon styles (and that simple is sometimes better) I changed my mind and will keep the heads-only. Somehow I need to make them better visible though. It's more a problem when in motion so I'm going to post a video soon.

Edit: Why not upload one right now: http://www.vimeo.com/17822583. Framerate sucks but it might give some impressions.

Also, Kevin, I really like your "color blobs" version of Relix' guy!

[PogueSquadron]

I don't know if anyone's asked - but are those meant to be bushes, or trees?

[Relix]

*snip*

It was a quick size reduction, I did decrease the color count by one...but I see your point. I really like outlines, so those might stay, so, maybe, er, almost color blobs with outlines?

I try something out...

Also, Kevin, I really like your "color blobs" version of Relix' guy!

Me, cry.

Edit:



...got kinda carried away with the last. Looks too simple for my liking...

[RotateMe]

They're meant to be trees. I will make a 32x32 tile of a big tree surrounded by small ones but right now, the bad proportion doesn't bother me that much.

Relix: Sorry, of course I knew it was a pretty girl, don't know why I said guy... also, I like your original sprite very much, too, but it's hard to match is level of detail for the whole game. I've seen some mockups of yours where I saw exactly the problem that the styles didn't match.

[Relix]

Yeah it's hard to keep one style when you're still learning.



I assume this (or something like this) is the mock up you've seen. Biggest flaw there is the fact that all parts have been done at different times, that grass bird for example was one of my first pixels, so it clashes pretty heavily.

And well, confession time; I wasn't even supposed to be the one doing the graphics, just the code for the game, but then my friend was like "I don't like pixeling anymore, hurrdurr" so I had to start learning pixeling myself and abadon my precious coding ,_,

I'm kinda at loss, what to do...

[J. R. Hill]

I like the last one best, try to put it into the same pose as the others.

[Relix]

Like this..?
 


Looks sillyh...and I still it's too simplified...

[Lizardheim]

Try making other stuff outside your comfort zone and get better at pixelart, then go back to that character.

[green]

Kevin has pointed out some valid points you really should keep in mind.

Here's my take on your character. Since images say more than a thousand words.

[Relix]

Try making other stuff outside your comfort zone and get better at pixelart, then go back to that character.

I've been doing that actually, sometimes I spam them to pixel joint.

...that's...awesome...
Something I could try to replicate.

How did you decide to give her fingereless gloves btw?
Because that's what they're supposed to be.

[green]

Try making other stuff outside your comfort zone and get better at pixelart, then go back to that character.

I've been doing that actually, sometimes I spam them to pixel joint.

...that's...awesome...
Something I could try to replicate.

How did you decide to give her fingereless gloves btw?
Because that's what they're supposed to be.

Just because, and I guess it makes the hands more readable.

[John Sandoval]

Notice that he simplified the shading. It makes it look a lot cleaner.

[Relix]

Asd.



I was trying to keep it simpler...then it/I just asd'd.

Maybe I should try something entirely different...or go back to the original. I just can't simplify and try to keep the same aspects intact as in the more detailed.