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« Reply #17040 on: February 27, 2012, 07:19:04 PM » |
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What if you made the surface of the water the same shape as the zig-zag on the cliff?
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« Reply #17041 on: February 27, 2012, 07:35:51 PM » |
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Kind of like it was originally?
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« Reply #17042 on: February 27, 2012, 07:40:35 PM » |
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At the same scale, I mean.
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« Reply #17043 on: February 27, 2012, 07:42:00 PM » |
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At the same scale, I mean.
OHHHHHHH You mean the zig zag below the cliff, not the grass.
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« Reply #17044 on: February 27, 2012, 08:47:34 PM » |
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I agree the water would look better if it had the same zig zag pattern as the cliff. Maybe even keep the top of the water flat but add a white zig zag pattern right under the waters surface, sort of like a shimmer on the top of the water. off topic little sprite doodles:
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« Reply #17045 on: February 28, 2012, 07:42:47 AM » |
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I vote for flat water, but with a one-pixel line of animated white on the top. That or flat water with some transparent sun rays breaking into it. (And I know flat water doesn't have dancing light rays in it, shut up. )
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« Reply #17046 on: February 28, 2012, 09:28:35 AM » |
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I don't think there's anything wrong with wavy water. But the transparency thing really bothers me. I think it would work just fine in the context of a larger landscape, but at this scale the water becomes less readable. The cuboid shape in the water looks disconnected from the island due to the contrasting colors, and because of that the water looks like a solid object instead of a fluid mass.
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« Reply #17047 on: February 28, 2012, 09:37:38 AM » |
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I would decrease the contrast in the water (it should also get darker as depth increases), and raise the crown of the tree above the roof – it's really bugging me that it ends exactly in line with the roof.
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« Reply #17048 on: February 28, 2012, 10:48:01 AM » |
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Hot damn, lots of nitpickers haha. I agree with the deeper the water, the darker it get. But I made the tree the same size on purpose.
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« Reply #17049 on: February 28, 2012, 12:01:23 PM » |
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why not use vectors? just a thought: (its pretty badly done around the house, first time using vectors)
plus then you can make it HUGE
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« Reply #17050 on: February 28, 2012, 12:02:14 PM » |
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But I made the tree the same size on purpose.
creating the tangent there is not a good idea. it bothers the eye.
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« Reply #17051 on: February 28, 2012, 02:32:09 PM » |
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Work in progress, inspired by nelson bole's . If you haven't watched that, I highly suggest you do.
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« Reply #17052 on: February 28, 2012, 02:50:09 PM » |
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Work in progress, inspired by nelson bole's . If you haven't watched that, I highly suggest you do. Looks like a good start!
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« Reply #17053 on: February 28, 2012, 03:44:54 PM » |
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the hype has piq'd love that ninto TRANSFORM nelson i love you and i love your work 'orfeu' and 'that one time' were amazing
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« Reply #17054 on: February 28, 2012, 07:42:10 PM » |
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It's good to see you working on something that's not entirely cubes, ninto. However, the shading (or lack of it) on everything makes them look like flat shapes, which is not good. Unless that's what you want, which I doubt.
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« Reply #17055 on: February 28, 2012, 08:12:17 PM » |
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It's good to see you working on something that's not entirely cubes, ninto. However, the shading (or lack of it) on everything makes them look like flat shapes, which is not good. Unless that's what you want, which I doubt.
Agreed. The two darker green patches on the bottom of the picture look like landmasses, but the one in the sky looks like just a patch. I just now realized that it was a 'planetoid' kind of thing. It's still an awesome drawing, though.
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« Reply #17056 on: March 01, 2012, 01:28:14 PM » |
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Guys i miss you What is this topic liike these days? what are you up to? no these aren't tears im just... it's dust its... dust...
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« Reply #17057 on: March 01, 2012, 02:03:56 PM » |
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I MISSED YOU TOO
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« Reply #17058 on: March 01, 2012, 03:46:20 PM » |
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« Reply #17059 on: March 01, 2012, 07:22:54 PM » |
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We welcome you with open arms <3
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