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[JaJitsu]

haha malo i like it.

enemy for Moonchild?

[heretic]

PJ
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been working on this for a while, finally finished, read the two links for more information

crits are fine but i'm gonna be really busy but thanks anyways <3

[Xion]

you have been working on that forever.

It looks nice, sir.

though the legs of the robots look a bit to perspective-defying for my liking.

[i wanna be the guy]

the lasers look like

not-lasers
they look more like glowing solid objects tbh

[kinnas]

the solid lasers look strangely in-style though, I kinda like it.
What's bothering me is the cast light on the frontmost astronaut guy, it's as if he has a dual-coloured spacesuit. That is the lightning should be more of a rim light.

[Eclipse]

the lasers look like

not-lasers
they look more like glowing solid objects tbh

they're actually lava spurts controlled by sort of magnetic waves

[moi]

They're actually alien penises.
(A laser shoudln't be shadowed like the other objects)

[MaloEspada]

haha malo i like it.

enemy for Moonchild?

Precisely. I am soon going to animate that thing, I guess. then I can post it here if I make any progress

EDIT:

    Idle       Attacking

[i wanna be the guy]

They're actually alien penises.
(A laser shoudln't be shadowed like the other objects)

Paper Shawn Hearts??? says:
 -why does dex make lasers look like some sorta gay not-laser
1up is depressed as fuck right now says:
 -he made them look like alien penises
 -long, thin, glowing alien penises
Paper Shawn Hearts??? says:
 -since when do lasers explode



these are valid crits dex, listen to them.

[Shawny]

PJ
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been working on this for a while, finally finished, read the two links for more information

crits are fine but i'm gonna be really busy but thanks anyways <3

the sky seems really empty to me. i know its space but isn't this some kinda alien battle? needs more ships!

also what i said about the lasers

[squidkid]

Kay, I did one with the shine and one without... I may do something to his shirt.

[i wanna be the guy]

it looks more like his head is being rotated with his body just added on as an afterthought right now

the body is really jumpy and sporadic, try to make that look a bit smoother and it should be good

vote for the shine btw

[JaJitsu]

haha malo i like it.

enemy for Moonchild?

Precisely. I am soon going to animate that thing, I guess. then I can post it here if I make any progress

EDIT:

    Idle       Attacking

The attacking is kind of stiff. Maybe move his legs up or something?
they are awesome tho

[MaloEspada]

Thanks JaJitsu, i just improved it a little. No need to show it, though.

I also prefer the one with highlights

[squidkid]

I fixed up his arms and feet and I think his body looks a bit smoother. Any other suggestions? I think he looks about done, other than his arms, but maybe color may help. Thanks guys.

[ChevyRay]

His right foot does something weird when he's facing us.

[heretic]

thanks everyone, I appreciate the comments and opinions but I'm going to be far too busy to change anything for now. I might revisit it in the future..

thanks anyways

[thedaemon]

thanks everyone, I appreciate the comments and opinions but I'm going to be far too busy to change anything for now. I might revisit it in the future..

thanks anyways

Considering how much work you've done on it, I'd say move on to the next piece.

[hsn2555]

thanks guys for the crits ..

totally lacks of charisma

i have to agree, a cape as thermic said might help solving this issue

he looks also fat and shirtless 

You'll have to wait until we release a demo

IMHO he should be pulling his arm backward more before he goes forward.

there is another attack,a stronger one .. where he pulls his arm backward more

Although it does look a bit strange for his jab.

take a closer look and tell me ..

[Kramlack]

This is roughly what I was trying to get done with the new black, white, red style. There would still be more tile pieces (spikes, clouds, various background objects, etc.), but this was the rough look I was trying to create.

Also, I keep making the sprites smaller.