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« Reply #6360 on: October 02, 2009, 03:03:37 AM » |
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the lasers look like
not-lasers they look more like glowing solid objects tbh
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« Reply #6361 on: October 02, 2009, 03:50:54 AM » |
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the solid lasers look strangely in-style though, I kinda like it. What's bothering me is the cast light on the frontmost astronaut guy, it's as if he has a dual-coloured spacesuit. That is the lightning should be more of a rim light.
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« Reply #6362 on: October 02, 2009, 04:04:54 AM » |
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the lasers look like
not-lasers they look more like glowing solid objects tbh
they're actually lava spurts controlled by sort of magnetic waves
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« Reply #6363 on: October 02, 2009, 05:20:25 AM » |
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They're actually alien penises. (A laser shoudln't be shadowed like the other objects)
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« Reply #6364 on: October 02, 2009, 07:56:02 AM » |
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haha malo i like it.
enemy for Moonchild?
Precisely. I am soon going to animate that thing, I guess. then I can post it here if I make any progress EDIT: Idle Attacking
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« Reply #6365 on: October 02, 2009, 03:06:24 PM » |
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They're actually alien penises. (A laser shoudln't be shadowed like the other objects)
Paper Shawn Hearts??? says: -why does dex make lasers look like some sorta gay not-laser 1up is depressed as fuck right now says: -he made them look like alien penises -long, thin, glowing alien penises Paper Shawn Hearts??? says: -since when do lasers explode these are valid crits dex, listen to them.
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« Reply #6366 on: October 02, 2009, 03:13:19 PM » |
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PJdAbeen working on this for a while, finally finished, read the two links for more information crits are fine but i'm gonna be really busy but thanks anyways <3 the sky seems really empty to me. i know its space but isn't this some kinda alien battle? needs more ships! also what i said about the lasers
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« Reply #6367 on: October 02, 2009, 06:19:58 PM » |
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Kay, I did one with the shine and one without... I may do something to his shirt.
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« Reply #6368 on: October 02, 2009, 06:30:35 PM » |
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it looks more like his head is being rotated with his body just added on as an afterthought right now
the body is really jumpy and sporadic, try to make that look a bit smoother and it should be good
vote for the shine btw
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« Reply #6369 on: October 02, 2009, 06:48:35 PM » |
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haha malo i like it.
enemy for Moonchild?
Precisely. I am soon going to animate that thing, I guess. then I can post it here if I make any progress EDIT: Idle Attacking The attacking is kind of stiff. Maybe move his legs up or something? they are awesome tho
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« Reply #6370 on: October 02, 2009, 06:58:10 PM » |
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Thanks JaJitsu, i just improved it a little. No need to show it, though. I also prefer the one with highlights
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« Reply #6371 on: October 02, 2009, 08:07:47 PM » |
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I fixed up his arms and feet and I think his body looks a bit smoother. Any other suggestions? I think he looks about done, other than his arms, but maybe color may help. Thanks guys.
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« Reply #6372 on: October 02, 2009, 08:20:19 PM » |
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His right foot does something weird when he's facing us.
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« Reply #6373 on: October 02, 2009, 08:22:17 PM » |
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thanks everyone, I appreciate the comments and opinions but I'm going to be far too busy to change anything for now. I might revisit it in the future..
thanks anyways
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« Reply #6374 on: October 02, 2009, 08:43:08 PM » |
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thanks everyone, I appreciate the comments and opinions but I'm going to be far too busy to change anything for now. I might revisit it in the future..
thanks anyways
Considering how much work you've done on it, I'd say move on to the next piece.
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« Reply #6375 on: October 02, 2009, 08:55:13 PM » |
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thanks guys for the crits .. totally lacks of charisma i have to agree, a cape as thermic said might help solving this issue he looks also fat and shirtless You'll have to wait until we release a demo IMHO he should be pulling his arm backward more before he goes forward.
there is another attack,a stronger one .. where he pulls his arm backward more Although it does look a bit strange for his jab. take a closer look and tell me ..
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« Reply #6376 on: October 02, 2009, 09:48:54 PM » |
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« Reply #6377 on: October 02, 2009, 09:54:31 PM » |
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Cool work Kramlack, I like it but I wonder if maybe a different shade of white could be easier on the eyes. I guess I would have to see the game in motion. Looks good though. Heres a new tree for some more scenery in my game.
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« Reply #6378 on: October 02, 2009, 10:34:50 PM » |
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This is lovely. The new sprite though looks a bit more like he's hanging his head, out of breath or something. Cool work Kramlack, I like it but I wonder if maybe a different shade of white could be easier on the eyes. I guess I would have to see the game in motion. Looks good though. Heres a new tree for some more scenery in my game. This looks a little flat at the moment. On the trunk for example all parts of it use all of the colour shades, where one side of it should be more in shadow and not use the brightest shade. Same for the leaves. The blue shade in the leaves initially looked like a pixelling error to me cos it's barely used, would be nice to use it more boldly as a blue uplight.
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« Reply #6379 on: October 02, 2009, 10:53:45 PM » |
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I think the base of the tree needs to shrink a lot, it's really out of balance.
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