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« Reply #6380 on: October 02, 2009, 11:08:40 PM »

I think I fixed some of the problems.

 Thanks for the crit Ishi, it really helped!
  alastair jack, i realize the base is pretty big but I dont really mind it.  My game is pretty big and I am the only artist working on it so I dont have too much time to get too nitpicky about a single tree.  Thanks for taking the time for the comment though i do appreciate any feedback.
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« Reply #6381 on: October 02, 2009, 11:21:47 PM »


That looks fantastically better! Grin

I agree, too, that you shouldn't get too caught up in too little of details (which you didn't; if you were to go further, you would be...).  Your judgment is great, I think. Smiley
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« Reply #6382 on: October 03, 2009, 12:51:34 AM »

Cool work Kramlack, I like it but I wonder if maybe a different shade of white could be easier on the eyes.  I guess I would have to see the game in motion.  Looks good though.

Heres a new tree for some more scenery in my game.


Not bad

But it's still very flat hehe
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« Reply #6383 on: October 03, 2009, 02:59:02 AM »

The whole point of 2D-graphics is to be flat, no?

It looks fantastic, imo. Show us more of that artstyle!
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« Reply #6384 on: October 03, 2009, 03:12:54 AM »

The whole point of 2D-graphics is to be flat, no?

It looks fantastic, imo. Show us more of that artstyle!
Unless you paste them onto a sphere! Then they're all bendy like Smiley
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« Reply #6385 on: October 03, 2009, 03:45:41 AM »

The whole point of 2D-graphics is to be flat, no?

It looks fantastic, imo. Show us more of that artstyle!

It's called "depth"
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« Reply #6386 on: October 03, 2009, 04:06:08 AM »

I really like the trunk! But I think the canopy needs some work.

An idea to bring out some more form: Brighten the areas that would be closer to the viewer, namely the middle area of the canopy. Basically, I'd expand the highlights so it looks more in line with the shading on the trunk (which is fantastic), and maybe even bring the canopy out to the right a little more.
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« Reply #6387 on: October 03, 2009, 06:37:43 AM »

His right foot does something weird when he's facing us.

New  Old
Is that better?

I think the only problem is that the mid tones should be lighter and the highlights should be fewer. I like the structure of the tree though, reminds me of that movie The Fountain for some reason.
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« Reply #6388 on: October 03, 2009, 09:07:51 AM »



The feet are still a bit weird. If you hide the top half of him and just look at the legs, they seem to freeze occasionally rather than smoothly rotate.

Ah I see, his feet are pointing at different angles. I've tried editing it a bit to make that come across more throughout the whole animation:



Not brilliant but I think that's where the problem lies at least.
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« Reply #6389 on: October 03, 2009, 12:33:13 PM »


I think the only problem is that the mid tones should be lighter and the highlights should be fewer. I like the structure of the tree though, reminds me of that movie The Fountain for some reason.
That's the old version. :/

Though, your critique MIGHT still apply to the new version.  I don't know.
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« Reply #6390 on: October 03, 2009, 01:46:15 PM »

Eh, figured I'd post it here.
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« Reply #6391 on: October 03, 2009, 01:54:27 PM »

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« Reply #6392 on: October 03, 2009, 02:09:45 PM »

Eh, figured I'd post it here.


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« Reply #6393 on: October 03, 2009, 02:36:16 PM »

Beautiful!
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« Reply #6394 on: October 03, 2009, 04:08:34 PM »


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« Reply #6395 on: October 03, 2009, 05:24:30 PM »

Played around with some pixels, pretty unsatisfyed with the result.

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« Reply #6396 on: October 03, 2009, 05:54:11 PM »

The tentacle at the bottom reminds me of Purple Tentacle from "Day of the Tentacle". It's hard to tell what you're going for though, is it a floor or just a random thing of pipes?
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« Reply #6397 on: October 03, 2009, 06:40:11 PM »

Its not so bad, its a good start.  I woudnt use those colors for the background, i dont like the tentacles colors and that green next to each other, it looks bad to me.  I would experiment with the background color some more.   Keep working on it, looks like your starting to get something there.
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« Reply #6398 on: October 03, 2009, 06:59:11 PM »

Maybe something more like this?



It's supposed to be floor, I think, or at least some kind of hovering platform.
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« Reply #6399 on: October 03, 2009, 07:23:33 PM »

Maybe something more like this?



It's supposed to be floor, I think, or at least some kind of hovering platform.

I find it a bit hard to believe that head is dangling off of that small cord, but it's not like I have to believe it.  Beer!

Maybe it would look neat if the head was hanging on the tentacle or something. Could end up giving a really cryptic monstrous feeling to your piece.  Evil
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