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« Reply #5730 on: August 20, 2009, 08:31:35 AM » |
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Looks good now. Before it looked like his body was a spinning cylinder.
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« Reply #5731 on: August 20, 2009, 08:40:05 AM » |
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 The game is not about wardrobes. Some of these are just for fun (like samus'). |
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« Reply #5732 on: August 20, 2009, 08:44:39 AM » |
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another one :  come on guys please tell me what you think |
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« Reply #5733 on: August 20, 2009, 09:51:12 AM » |
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another one : come on guys please tell me what you think I think the first one is better  However, it looks like a fledgling. There nothing special about, it lacks deeper shadows (less depth, etc). But that doesn't have to be wrong. It's just, uhm. Yeah. That's it. Nothing special but ok. |
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« Reply #5734 on: August 20, 2009, 10:10:33 AM » |
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If his head is turning should the highlight on his head just a bit? |
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« Reply #5735 on: August 20, 2009, 10:16:49 AM » |
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First one is better, yeah.
Also, looking at my new avatar how's the animation?
Oh Chevy, yeah you might want to turn the highlights on the little dude's hat.
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« Reply #5736 on: August 20, 2009, 10:20:56 AM » |
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In his crawling animation, that little piece of hair on the top of his head seems weird imo.
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« Reply #5737 on: August 20, 2009, 10:48:36 AM » |
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If his head is turning should the highlight on his head just a bit? I'll give it a shot in a bit, here. |
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« Reply #5738 on: August 20, 2009, 11:56:55 AM » |
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I vote no highlight turning. It's a highlight after all. Give it a try though.
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« Reply #5739 on: August 20, 2009, 11:58:53 AM » |
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Yeah, I'll figure it'll just look weird, but it's worth a shot. I tried making the hat bob a bit, just to give the head a bit more movement, but even just a little was too much, and it looked like he was at a metal concert.  |
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« Reply #5740 on: August 20, 2009, 12:57:03 PM » |
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what could I do to make this cuter? I would really appreciate if someone could give me some tips with the shading  thanks |
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« Reply #5741 on: August 20, 2009, 02:39:48 PM » |
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You're just shading the edges, you need to create shadows, like underneath the wing for example. I would anti-alias the inside of the outline instead of what you're doing with the edges of the sprite currently. But yeah, I think shadows would be significant enough to give it much needed depth. I don't think it really needs to be made any cuter. Edit: Oh wait, you did. Maybe you need more contrast. Also, what everyone else said: pink cheeks.  dsfsadff |
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« Reply #5742 on: August 20, 2009, 03:17:25 PM » |
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PINK CHEEKS  Give it pink cheeks  |
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« Reply #5743 on: August 20, 2009, 03:27:38 PM » |
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Aw man, I was gonna suggest that. Also, give it more ruffled feathers, puffier birds are cuter birds.
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« Reply #5744 on: August 20, 2009, 03:40:42 PM » |
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I redid the last little animation for my tousle again.  I fixed its arms and gave it a little bob without making more frames. I'm kinda expecting I'll have to give it another frame or to to make it look really smooth, but for now, have I improved? |
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