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« Reply #10470 on: September 20, 2010, 06:20:14 PM » |
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First real sprite work for me, by which I mean the first sprite work from me that I don't completely despise.  Critique till your fingers bleed. |
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« Reply #10471 on: September 20, 2010, 07:10:24 PM » |
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Your choice of colours is pretty average, they look over saturated and don't harmonise. I can't imagine the sprite in a game world because of the huge range of colours you've used on him, any one of them will clash with a background. The colour's you've chosen for shadow don't work well because they are just slightly darker shades of their lighter counterparts, add in some different hues into the shadows. You have a few jagged edges in the linework. http://fleh.sereneworx.com/skitch/skitched-20100921-130728.pngThe proportions, while clearly intentionally cartoon-esque, don't do much for me. On that point, the eyes are a bit too big for my liking. He doesn't have a neck which is odd, because the way you've built him it feels like there should be one. It almost looks like his torso is in front of his head. His hands are completely different sizes, and if that's an attempt at perspective I'd suggest you take it away. Perspective in such a small thing as a sprite is mostly useless. Similarly, the legs and shoes are different sizes. Deer stuff!   |
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« Reply #10472 on: September 20, 2010, 07:23:16 PM » |
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deeer! <3
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« Reply #10473 on: September 20, 2010, 08:08:58 PM » |
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Deers aren't teal, good sir.  |
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If you wish to make a video game from scratch, you must first invent the universe.
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« Reply #10474 on: September 20, 2010, 08:11:25 PM » |
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The top deer looks like he's made out of jello. The pattern's just flowing all over him, like he's barely holding together. I like the bottom one, though.
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sereneworx
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« Reply #10475 on: September 20, 2010, 09:45:29 PM » |
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Deers aren't teal, good sir. Teal coloured deer are. They are also apparently excellent at standing still.  |
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Jared C
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« Reply #10476 on: September 21, 2010, 02:34:35 AM » |
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NO! I like the first idle a lot. It's like the deer is some sort of spirit creature that's just barely existing in some gelatinous ghostly form.
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« Reply #10477 on: September 21, 2010, 02:46:51 AM » |
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Well, he does glow.  |
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« Reply #10478 on: September 21, 2010, 04:10:15 AM » |
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Love the deer running animation. Like the standing still too. Perhaps if his ear flicked now and then as if listening for sounds, would be cool  |
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« Reply #10479 on: September 21, 2010, 06:46:42 AM » |
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A game that you hunt mystical creatures, much like that glowing deer.. Would be fun!  |
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« Reply #10480 on: September 21, 2010, 06:48:36 AM » |
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Love the deer running animation. Like the standing still too. Perhaps if his ear flicked now and then as if listening for sounds, would be cool Yeah, he shouldn't be too still... although it does give him a sort of otherworldly air that I think fits him more than "jello deer". |
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« Reply #10481 on: September 21, 2010, 08:11:06 AM » |
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i liked jello deer :c
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Adamski
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« Reply #10482 on: September 21, 2010, 08:29:49 AM » |
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Yeah jello deer was an interesting animation, but deer do stand perfectly still?  |
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« Reply #10483 on: September 21, 2010, 08:59:45 AM » |
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Yeah jello deer was an interesting animation, but deer spirit do stand perfectly still? fixed :p |
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« Reply #10484 on: September 21, 2010, 09:48:49 AM » |
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Yes I know its fixed, I was referring to the posts before mine.
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