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« Reply #120 on: April 15, 2010, 08:36:45 AM »

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« Reply #121 on: April 15, 2010, 08:39:53 AM »

Woah...his back seems to stretch when he does the kick. It's still very good
It's called 'squash and stretch'. It is a fundamental principle of animation. By exaggerating shapes and movements, you can make the motion look much clearer and smoother.

If you look at a single frame of Looney Toons or Disney animation, the characters will sometimes look extremely distorted, but when the animation is actually playing, it looks great.
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« Reply #122 on: April 15, 2010, 10:05:05 AM »

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i'm not a fan of that weird hand animation. I have no idea what the hand is doing, it looks like it's alive and moving on its own or something. The rest looks great, btw.
Keep rocking, dudes!!
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« Reply #123 on: April 15, 2010, 10:36:21 AM »

Nitpickerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrs, TRANSFORM!

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(The nitpickres converge to form a GIANT nitpicker robot. Will our hero survive? Find out, on the next episode of ArdentSideburn!)
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« Reply #124 on: April 15, 2010, 11:59:24 AM »

the hands are really kind of unnatural in that walk cycle. It's not nitpicking.I'm fixing it up.
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« Reply #125 on: April 15, 2010, 12:37:24 PM »

Agreed, it's nitpicking when it looks ready to go, which I don't think it did. Nice work Ardent! Enjoyed all of your stuff so far Smiley
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« Reply #126 on: April 15, 2010, 01:09:29 PM »

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« Reply #127 on: April 15, 2010, 02:16:34 PM »

great job ardent

yeah, forgot about the old squash and stretch. you should see some of the superman cartoon stills
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« Reply #128 on: April 15, 2010, 02:39:15 PM »

i think mister sideburn is taking awesome enhancing substances...


i want some...
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« Reply #129 on: April 15, 2010, 02:46:10 PM »


Yeah, much better than my hand :D
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« Reply #130 on: April 15, 2010, 03:22:34 PM »

Nitpiciking is a good thing. Without nitpicking how would you get rid of lice?
Also, new hand looks awesome.
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« Reply #131 on: April 15, 2010, 03:27:42 PM »

It's way better, great improvement!  Smiley
I don't like the way the shading changes on his chest, but meh, it's fine as it is.
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« Reply #132 on: April 15, 2010, 03:44:04 PM »

I think it's the shadow of his hand.
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« Reply #133 on: April 15, 2010, 05:53:57 PM »



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slightly different curve above the nose.
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« Reply #134 on: April 15, 2010, 07:54:50 PM »

Nice pose. He looks thoughtful, but still aggressive.

I like the second one a bit better. It needs a thicker black outline, though. And his head should probably be shifted a bit to the left, so it doesn't look like you ran out of room while you were drawing it.
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« Reply #135 on: April 15, 2010, 08:01:58 PM »

Nice pose. He looks thoughtful, but still aggressive.

I like the second one a bit better. It needs a thicker black outline, though. And his head should probably be shifted a bit to the left, so it doesn't look like you ran out of room while you were drawing it.
Thanks. It took me a while to get it right.

I'll try moving the head and post a newer version soon.

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« Reply #136 on: April 15, 2010, 11:46:11 PM »

Looking great, guys!
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« Reply #137 on: April 16, 2010, 07:23:48 AM »



made some changes of my own to your icon
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« Reply #138 on: April 16, 2010, 10:05:41 AM »

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