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« Reply #15 on: April 03, 2012, 12:37:01 PM » |
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Great edit.  Thanks, I am thinking of doing one for the human aswell! 
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« Reply #16 on: April 04, 2012, 03:46:26 AM » |
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Due to the great results of the recolouring of the alert screen, I might redo the buttons. I am now considering maybe changing the colour scheme to a dark blue palette. What does everyone else think?
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« Reply #17 on: April 21, 2012, 03:13:07 AM » |
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 A quick devil I did for fun 
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« Reply #18 on: April 24, 2012, 11:24:51 AM » |
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Run man and Karoshi!  
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« Reply #19 on: May 04, 2012, 11:07:32 AM » |
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 A man standing still.
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« Reply #20 on: May 11, 2012, 10:01:27 AM » |
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Whoops nearly forgot to post this   I like his head and the general gist of his design. Going to do a few more edits when I get the chance 
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« Reply #21 on: May 11, 2012, 12:13:00 PM » |
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 15 minute edit!
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« Last Edit: May 12, 2012, 08:02:39 AM by Squid Party »
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« Reply #22 on: May 11, 2012, 12:19:57 PM » |
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1.5 
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« Reply #23 on: May 11, 2012, 12:34:49 PM » |
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Edit 2: 
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« Reply #24 on: May 11, 2012, 01:18:29 PM » |
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His pose is looking better, but his arms are looking a little bit chunky at the top. The non-black outline has definitely helped, but the fact there's no outline on the head should probably be addressed.
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« Reply #25 on: May 12, 2012, 01:31:55 AM » |
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Edit 2:  Perhaps not what you're going for, but my edit:  Also at least a slight angle is necessary to make the sprite less awkward: 
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« Reply #26 on: May 12, 2012, 01:46:55 AM » |
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@ Yrgkala: Thanks for making an edit, has a really cool manga feel, looks great! I was thinking of having my sprite as the default for when you are not doing anything and then have a breathing animation or something  @JMickle: Thanks for you continuing advice it really is invaluable to me, I was thinking of maybe putting a darker brown outline around his head and beard after reading this. 
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« Reply #27 on: May 13, 2012, 11:53:45 AM » |
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HUZZAH!The character sprite is done for my first game in which you throw rocks at dragons! Really pleased with him! 
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« Reply #28 on: May 13, 2012, 05:32:29 PM » |
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From what I've noticed you're not really applying the lessons they teach you. Work on shading and color choice all the time, don't make something then skip to another right away. Be sure to tinker it a bit before you move on. But your practice is good, whatever happens, don't stop spriting. Everyone's been where you've been, look where we all are now and let's see what can become of you. 
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« Reply #29 on: May 14, 2012, 08:47:11 AM » |
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From what I've noticed you're not really applying the lessons they teach you. Work on shading and color choice all the time, don't make something then skip to another right away. Be sure to tinker it a bit before you move on. But your practice is good, whatever happens, don't stop spriting. Everyone's been where you've been, look where we all are now and let's see what can become of you.  I have just started getting to grips with stencyl and wanted to create a quick game so I needed a new sprite  Also towards the end of your post you make it sound like I am disheartened, don't know where you got that. I am extremely happy with my progress 
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