I think it's really nice. I like the sad or travelling a lonely space kind of feeling it creates. The noise adds a lot to it as well, if it's not accidental, though you should try to lower the volume of that a little. Overall it sounds a lot like music for some old tv-series, something sci-fi related. As how to improve, I don't know. I think it's great just as it is but an obvious improvement would be to make it longer and more interesting. You're currently just repeating the main theme. Keep up the good work!Calum Bowen
Did you compose the music after the editing was done? I mean watching the film and writing music to fit each shot. If so, nicely done. If not, even more nicely done. At first I didn't notice it but in the end, it was great and added a lot it. Especially the smile at 2:56, I laughed when hearing that sound.Nate_G
Honestly, I don't know what to say because this is the kind of music I know nothing about. I like it, but I can't really sit down and listen to it. Though, I can see it working very well as an background ambience in a game. It reminds me of what Doom 3 did with its eerie ambient sounds, I wish more games were like that. What is it for? What is supposed to go on in it? Please tell me more TristezaOrange
The first thing I noticed was the mechanic sound of the base, it's very precise and sounds a lot like picked bass, but this kind of music should be more relaxed and softer. Fretless bass maybe?
Sorry, I can't explain it very well but I hope you get my point. Other than that I like it, made me a little happier. The singing is okay, though could of course be improved.