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« Reply #7470 on: April 23, 2012, 03:34:17 PM » |
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I made a poster today for my school. 
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« Reply #7471 on: April 23, 2012, 05:40:31 PM » |
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« Reply #7472 on: April 23, 2012, 09:08:10 PM » |
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Jack & Hawt Koffee - both of those look great. Love the colors on the poster and the character's style.
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« Reply #7473 on: April 23, 2012, 09:21:44 PM » |
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Sorry, my wrist died before I got to the leaves on her tree-broom thing. 
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« Reply #7474 on: April 24, 2012, 01:33:59 AM » |
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 I have very little knowledge of anatomy (human or otherwise); c&c? EDIT: 
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« Reply #7475 on: April 24, 2012, 02:50:12 AM » |
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Yrgkala, coloring is pretty good, i like the first head the most, highest contrast makes it more interesting  As for the anatomy is not that bad, you should try using some reference, it helps a great deal! Pen, thank you!! Hawt Koffee, i like it! to improve it you should work on the contrast between metal parts and cloth, the shading is very similar right now. McMutton Elves! Love the hat :D
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« Reply #7476 on: April 24, 2012, 03:03:14 AM » |
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@yrgkala fix the nostril; too circular  k im don
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« Reply #7477 on: April 24, 2012, 03:22:01 AM » |
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@yrgkala fix the nostril; too circular good point,  EDIT: color&neck fix  EDIT2: I think I can call it done. 
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« Reply #7479 on: April 24, 2012, 10:18:09 AM » |
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John I've been seeing a lot of improvement in your avatars, keep it up. 
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« Reply #7480 on: April 24, 2012, 10:19:50 AM » |
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Holy crap, nice stuff!
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vegan • socialist • atheist • humanist • liberal • FOSSer programmer • feminist • animal rights activist • pacifist • teetotaller
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« Reply #7481 on: April 24, 2012, 10:57:01 AM » |
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Yeah, I think you should play a bit more with different facial features & shapes. To me a lot of your women look rather similar to each other on that part.
Hm, you're right. This is a (totally legitimate) criticism I've recieved before, yet have some difficulty responding to. What's funny though is that the original piece I drew looks a lot like Noomi Rapace (from the Swedish version of The Girl with the Dragon Tatoo), but as I kept working on it, I toned down the high cheekbones and the nose and made the eyes more circular... I think I'll change it back a bit. Also, thanks guise. Will keep workin' and learnin'. Perhaps you could try to draw people from different ethnic background? Facial features differ rather much and by trying to draw some of them you might learn new shapes and broaden your toolbox.
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« Reply #7482 on: April 24, 2012, 10:58:50 AM » |
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Whoa, these are really awesome! Love the style of 'em
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« Reply #7483 on: April 24, 2012, 12:35:21 PM » |
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@thresided: that's purely awesome 
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« Reply #7484 on: April 24, 2012, 01:36:42 PM » |
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Speed-doodling ideas for my game... 
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