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« Reply #8160 on: October 12, 2012, 11:47:33 AM » |
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Reminds me a of the chi blockers from Legend of Korra.
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« Reply #8161 on: October 14, 2012, 04:53:18 PM » |
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I see there is no amusing you people. So have this.
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« Reply #8162 on: October 14, 2012, 07:49:30 PM » |
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« Reply #8163 on: October 14, 2012, 11:58:03 PM » |
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(view url for full size) I hate looking at something for so long that I can't see the flaws any more, or tell imagined flaws from real ones, even though I know there's something off somewhere. Because there always is. Is her mouth too far from her nose? Is something wrong with her lips? Does the top of her hair look as fucked up as I think it does? blaugh. Anyway I'll fix the wrong things in the next picture, I'm bored with this one.
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« Reply #8164 on: October 15, 2012, 04:00:47 AM » |
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the basic proportions are a bit off. everything, eyes, nose, mouth, is to big compared to the size of the head. also the eyes are to high up. eyes are usaully in the middle of the head, as far from the chin as to the top of the head. right now they make her forehead to small, almost caveman-like
her nose is very big. but worse yet, its flat. her right nostril should be hidden behind the tip of the nose.
the lips looks wrong beacuse the upper lip doesnt have enough shadow. the eyesockets have a pretty dark shadow from the light coming from above. so should the upper lip.
the hair is good though. very good flow and volume
hope this helps!
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« Reply #8167 on: October 16, 2012, 01:27:15 PM » |
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Looks nice.
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« Reply #8169 on: October 16, 2012, 02:54:38 PM » |
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Yes, thank you, that helps very much!
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« Reply #8171 on: October 17, 2012, 03:02:40 AM » |
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« Reply #8173 on: October 19, 2012, 07:46:09 AM » |
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Nice painting Xion! Just to add on to what stickadtroja said: The upper lip is the biggest problem area for me. It's way to round and full. Female upperlips are usually relatively flat and have a steep angle. If you take off that highlight, decrease the size a bit and angle it more I think it will help a lot.
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« Reply #8174 on: October 19, 2012, 07:21:02 PM » |
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A thing I made for a thing we're throwing. SO EXCITED
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« Reply #8175 on: October 19, 2012, 10:56:08 PM » |
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That poster is really cool, I also really like the font you used for the title.
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« Reply #8177 on: October 21, 2012, 07:41:01 AM » |
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I did a few fanarts in the past few weeks when I should have been studying for midterms. (li'l sniper from tf2) (Elf from D&D: Shadow Over Mystara) I also did a demon lady portrait for a "draw every day" project I've been trying to do (and kinda failing)
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« Reply #8178 on: October 21, 2012, 06:35:36 PM » |
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« Last Edit: January 20, 2013, 10:11:24 AM by Andrio »
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« Reply #8179 on: October 21, 2012, 07:34:37 PM » |
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