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« on: March 25, 2015, 11:09:18 AM »





Here's the title screen I made today. The character shown is a zombie rabbit, one of many characters. Would love to hear your feedback. Thanks!
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« Reply #1 on: March 25, 2015, 11:26:35 PM »

Looks pretty damn legit to me. Maybe a few things could help...



... assuming the orange is lava, some orange glow against the walls would help it feel more like a light source. Maybe the blood could be brighter/more saturated for clarity (hard to see that demon rabbits face clearly and the blood on the button looks kinda flat). And the buttons are kinda close to the same color as the lava, so maybe it could be even brighter too.


I like that look. That tileset looks great!
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« Reply #2 on: March 26, 2015, 06:45:36 AM »

Awesome, thanks for the great suggestions!
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