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[campride]

[lobstersteve]

the blurry background (the ground) looks very out of place, in comparisson to the other cartoony stuff.
otherwise it looks ok i guess.. try to keep the style unified everywhere.

[Muffinhat]

Just curious, were these assets drawn yourself?

[campride]

Sorry for the huge delay.  Thanks for the feedback lobstersteve.

@Muffinhat The owner of Salad Fingers, David Firth, provided some of the assets, however I had to redraw much of it, due to some quality issues. Additionally, all new stuff not seen in the Salad Fingers show was drawn by me. I think it looks much more pleasing now. Have a look see.

[Muffinhat]

David Firth himself gave you the assets? That's pretty awesome. As for critique, I like the UI design for the most part since it blends well with Firth's wacky art style. Assuming this is a 2D point and click or something of the like, the perspective in the shots could use a little bit of work, such as the placement of the nettles and seeds in screenshots 1 and 2, respectively, but that's really all I have to say. Good work so far!