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« on: July 28, 2015, 09:01:08 PM »




I am looking for feedback on my alpha demo. We are going to have a custom GUI in a week but I want to vet the plot a bit and see where i can make improvements.

The Demo is roughly 10 minutes. It is like a novel.

http://www.indiedb.com/games/black-sands-origins/downloads/black-sands-prologue-alpha-version
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« Reply #1 on: July 29, 2015, 02:04:05 AM »

Pros:
  • beautiful music
  • story is interesting

Cons:
  • the menu UI is a bit confusing
  • character-by-character printing of story text is way too slow
  • there is a lot of text to read...

Not much more to say, it's only the prologue after all, no actual gameplay  Smiley

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« Reply #2 on: July 29, 2015, 06:01:52 AM »

good critique. Glad only problems you saw were technical ones. They can easily be fixed.
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