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Kiki's Delivery Service (Majo no Takkyûbin - Kiki La Petite Sorcière) (unofficial)
You've got the structure and class to your music. Like Barendhoff, I agree that there is a beauty that is uniquely yours, the desire to have a simple message through complex articulation is a daunting one but you pulled it off with aplomb, I enjoyed how fast paced it was yet it still felt like it could belong. You could add what Barendhoff said, and maybe in your future songs add even more vivace like (horns, trumpets) to your tracks, it sounds like (bad pun), you're going for a unique fast paced nostalgic style that wants to get to the center of your song, which is most definitely not a bad thing
. Like a swing waltz sorta
Good luck, they're all very nice to listen to!! Cheers!