http://up.servut.us/14444trying to learn to make music. This close to giving up, becouse (ohnoes) my first song turned out so crappy
It's not that bad. One thing I would change is the... piercing crispness of the piano. In such a quiet and deserted seeming mood, it is an unwelcome guest. It would sound better maybe as a low whistle or something like that. Also- unity. The song should have a familiar beat, something that makes it all flow together, like a repeating rhythm, and a lead with a sort of togetherness, perhaps a semi-repeating lead, or variations on the same tune (like a higher note at the end of a note string that wasn't there in the previous repetition)
I have to say, really good for a first attempt! When I first tried, I only used one instrument, always the same note spacing, and randomly clicked out notes. If you heard it, you would plug your ears within the first second- at least, everyone else I showed it to did
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