I like the core concept, and I can definitely see a kernel of truth within the idea. However, I kinda felt that the explanation was a bit vague, and I felt that the symbolism of the cutouts kinda shifted around a bit to accomodate the train of thought. Then again, maybe I just missed something and it all lines up on paper...
I don't know...to me, it feels at the moment like one of those ideas that just isn't there
yet. Like it's at that horrible point where it's just
defined enough to be worth expressing, yet not defined enough to be clearly communicable. And it kinda sucks because I am really
fascinated with the idea and I really
wanna dig in and play with it and tear it apart to see if it still holds its ground, but the idea hasn't been solidified enough for me to do that.
Anyway, I really hope you continue on with this idea, and I'm excited to see where it heads!