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« Reply #2900 on: May 10, 2011, 04:28:44 AM » |
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« Reply #2901 on: May 10, 2011, 04:47:44 AM » |
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try making the crest a bit bolder - remember the water is changing direction so there's going to be a curve at the top as it begins to fall downwards
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« Reply #2902 on: May 10, 2011, 05:03:07 AM » |
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Nice addition. However, I'm not sure the water would reform that quickly after the rock, after splitting in to two.
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« Reply #2903 on: May 10, 2011, 05:09:53 AM » |
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 The transparent water was overkill. Nice addition. However, I'm not sure the water would reform that quickly after the rock, after splitting in to two.
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« Reply #2904 on: May 10, 2011, 05:22:05 AM » |
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Less mockups and more screenshots.    As always, I feel my characters are too small when I make them fit within a tile.  Also that fullmoon background is totally placeholder |
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« Reply #2905 on: May 10, 2011, 05:35:27 AM » |
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 Less mockups and more screenshots. But this topic is for mockups! Doesn't change the fact that those do look nice though. I like the character very much. |
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« Reply #2906 on: May 10, 2011, 08:55:16 AM » |
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 This is actually my first attempt at pixel art (and my first post on TIGForums!). I really like how it came out so I'm planning to make a little game out of it, probably a little metroidvania  Any comments on how I could improve some elements are welcomed! |
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« Reply #2907 on: May 10, 2011, 09:06:20 AM » |
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[image] This is actually my first attempt at pixel art (and my first post on TIGForums!). I really like how it came out so I'm planning to make a little game out of it, probably a little metroidvania Any comments on how I could improve some elements are welcomed! Very nice. I especially like the fractures on wall edges and the chains. The skeleton is kinde cute.   |
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« Reply #2908 on: May 10, 2011, 09:46:11 AM » |
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« Reply #2909 on: May 10, 2011, 11:01:17 AM » |
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First attempt? Dude, you're talented. I love the cutesy, yet macabre feel of it. Keep it lo-fi, it seems to work really well. Got a programmer? :p |
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« Reply #2910 on: May 10, 2011, 11:54:26 AM » |
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First attempt? Dude, you're talented. I love the cutesy, yet macabre feel of it. Keep it lo-fi, it seems to work really well. Got a programmer? :p
Thanks! Much appreciated :] Actually, like I said in my intro post: http://forums.tigsource.com/index.php?topic=45.msg557547#msg557547, I'm trying to get it done 100% by myself  Thanks for the offer though  |
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« Reply #2911 on: May 10, 2011, 01:43:19 PM » |
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« Reply #2912 on: May 10, 2011, 01:48:58 PM » |
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Less mockups and more screenshots. As always, I feel my characters are too small when I make them fit within a tile. Also that fullmoon background is totally placeholder i like this. got any more? |
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« Reply #2913 on: May 10, 2011, 02:11:32 PM » |
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ben_hurr, very appealing indeed. Great little character there.
And wyel, very nice atmosphere there too.
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« Reply #2914 on: May 10, 2011, 02:26:39 PM » |
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Less mockups and more screenshots. As always, I feel my characters are too small when I make them fit within a tile. Also that fullmoon background is totally placeholder i like this. got any more? I'm baking another batch in the oven. And thanks guys! |
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« Reply #2915 on: May 10, 2011, 03:38:35 PM » |
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Haven't posted in a while.  |
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« Reply #2916 on: May 10, 2011, 04:34:42 PM » |
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This is actually my first attempt at pixel art (and my first post on TIGForums!). I really like how it came out so I'm planning to make a little game out of it, probably a little metroidvania Any comments on how I could improve some elements are welcomed! You should make the background elements pop more! The sewage pipes and pillars could add more, I think, to the overall stage if they contrasted more with the background. Perhaps with a darkened shade of blue? It's a really sweet mockup, and I'd love to play that game. Your character looks great! |
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« Reply #2917 on: May 10, 2011, 08:48:24 PM » |
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You'll do great. What platform you aiming for? Hope you make it cross-platform... |
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« Reply #2918 on: May 11, 2011, 05:26:58 AM » |
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You should make the background elements pop more! The sewage pipes and pillars could add more, I think, to the overall stage if they contrasted more with the background. Perhaps with a darkened shade of blue?
It's a really sweet mockup, and I'd love to play that game. Your character looks great!
Thanks for the comment. Actually, I thought reducing the background's contrast would help the "important" elements pop more, but I'll definitely give it a try anyway You'll do great. What platform you aiming for? Hope you make it cross-platform...
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« Reply #2919 on: May 11, 2011, 03:30:25 PM » |
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Kinda same thing as yesterday with a character.  |
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