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« Reply #4845 on: May 07, 2012, 04:57:55 AM » |
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Changed the two darkest colors of the stone walls.
See how much even that helps?
Yeah that looks better, ta. I've tweaked the tiles, not gone quite a dark as that but not far off. Little game I'd like to make sometime soon.
That's lovely! Especially the blobby effect on the colours around the edge. Puzzle game mockup. Haven't done Game Boy style in ages.   
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« Reply #4846 on: May 07, 2012, 10:03:53 AM » |
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I like that bomb sprite, also like the treasure chest sprite. I'm a little confused by the animation of the walking guy though. Is he wearing a cape or does he just have big arms? If their arms they don't look connected to the body, maybe because the hands are moving a little bit slower than the arms. I might just be staring at it too long though, because every once and awhile I see the walk.
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« Reply #4847 on: May 07, 2012, 10:05:45 AM » |
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« Reply #4848 on: May 07, 2012, 11:57:14 AM » |
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I like that bomb sprite, also like the treasure chest sprite. I'm a little confused by the animation of the walking guy though. Is he wearing a cape or does he just have big arms? If their arms they don't look connected to the body, maybe because the hands are moving a little bit slower than the arms. I might just be staring at it too long though, because every once and awhile I see the walk. It's a girl with big hair. Might need some tweaking for readability  (although the other directions and seeing her on the title screen beforehand would probably help.)
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« Reply #4849 on: May 07, 2012, 01:12:54 PM » |
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Seems kinda weird that the hair behind her and the hair on her head are different colors. Maybe have some of her hair peaking out of her bandana. But god damn that mockup is gorgeous anyways.
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« Reply #4850 on: May 07, 2012, 01:18:10 PM » |
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maybe it might help to have a puff of hair coming out on her forehead or to show her sideburns somehow.
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« Reply #4851 on: May 07, 2012, 01:32:59 PM » |
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Seems kinda weird that the hair behind her and the hair on her head are different colors.
wearing a bandanna in the concept art
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« Reply #4852 on: May 07, 2012, 02:56:16 PM » |
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Oh. Well I'm dum.
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« Reply #4853 on: May 07, 2012, 02:58:16 PM » |
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I immediately saw it as a girl with big hair and a bandanna, but I agree it could be a little bit more readable.
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« Reply #4854 on: May 07, 2012, 05:31:27 PM » |
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 i dont think i've seriously tried to make tiles in over 6 years now how obvious is it e: UPDATED IT BECAUSE THAT PORTRAIT WAS PISSING ME OFF E2:  FORGOT HIS JACKET
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« Reply #4855 on: May 07, 2012, 05:34:50 PM » |
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looks just like one of my
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« Reply #4856 on: May 07, 2012, 06:01:23 PM » |
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Lights look a little weird and the vents under the window are a strange color, but everything else looks great.
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« Reply #4857 on: May 07, 2012, 06:04:59 PM » |
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1up and shawn
i'm too gay for two men
how will my kokoro decide
ps: where is fucking goku
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« Reply #4858 on: May 07, 2012, 06:17:21 PM » |
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1up and shawn
that reminds me i really need to get shawn to Actually Help with some of this or not things have actually been moving since i stopped trying to get his help lmao also, GOKU IS ON VACATION FOR THE WEEK. He's getting a haircut. This takes a week to do, you see.
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« Reply #4859 on: May 07, 2012, 06:30:22 PM » |
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saiyans better not get haircuts. their hair doesn't grow back.
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