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Personally, I find the red robot pretty dang terrible. Constructive Criticism please?
The other two are other characters from my game, and they're just there to help you see the basic art style.

[Lexonite]

your shading looks a bit flat..
I did an edit on some of the red guy for example..

[gggfhfdh]

in all of them you're doing the traditional New Guy At Art thing to do and shading just to shade

you shouldnt ever do that

you should shade to show depth
thats what shading is for

[MarkRMichaels]

Additionally, I think flipping his right foot horizontally might make him look a little more consistent with the rest of the cast. The way it is now, his upper body looks like it's facing a different direction than his lower body.

edit: Or make the foot facing the camera so it looks like a 3/4 view.

your shading looks a bit flat..
I did an edit on some of the red guy for example..

Good advice here, just the specular highlight on his head really gives a lot of information without a lot of detail.

[petertos]

I agree,

the other sprites (I like them!) are in a sort of scorzo. So if this character would be in a scorzo either it would look better. So you did and it's better.

Great job!