Okay, so I'll try to review your game as serious and as critical as possible. Taking every tiny bad thing of the game, and slapping it in your face. I guess you want to get this to be released on Iphone? No? I don't know, I just don't think many people are in the mood to play such game on there pc. Oh well, let's do the review.
Okay, after all let's just tell you what isn't good about the game in a list.
- The game needs a logo. Every game does! Just plane text with a bit shade isn't a logo.
- It's annoying to read the scoreboard. The numbers, names and scores should all be on 1 line. Don't center the complete text.
- Also, the font of the text of the highscore, is too small.
- Solution: Show only the score, and show more info if you click on it. Also, make a scroll function so you have more room for more highscores.
- The way of falling is really weird. You jump, you hang a bit in the air, and bam, you fall with the same speed. Why isn't there any gravity?
- What's up with the "Game Over" voice? It isn't really necessary. And even if it was, why such a dramatic low voice? The game is a fun childish game. Shouldn't the voice sound fun and childish too?
- Needs more different jumping sounds
- Not only for the highscore. Use a different font everywhere. White text with a shadow isn't always clear. Simply giving it a black border could change a lot.
Well.. that's most of what I can say about your game right now.
The main question is: Why should I play your game, while I could just play Doodle Jump? What has your game, wich makes it more fun to play? Think about that.