Just finished it. I didn't understand the end, and it felt like the game fell apart a bit - I was wandering around a field and it kept saying I should return to the carriage, when I hadn't seen any carriage, and had no idea what I was doing. Then I got to the carriage, and was told the driver was inanimate, and then that was it. I did like the feeling at the end that it was a new sunny day.
Generally I thought it was nicely written, except that I got no feel for the layout of the town centre. It seemed to be a few snapshots of scenes, with arbitrary directions linking them. The description of the town hall especially didn't make sense to me.
Otherwise, sweet.