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« on: May 29, 2011, 04:02:30 AM »



Well, i just my my first "real" piece of pixelart, and i would like some feedback for it.

I'm not the type of guy that uses "little colors", because i just don't like the little color look, so don't start bashing it because of that.

All the other helpful criticism is always welcome, desired even Tongue.

Greetings, shiritt.
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« Reply #1 on: May 29, 2011, 04:12:31 AM »

While the shading and colors are good I think that pose/anatomy/proportions could be better. Before starting pixeling u should draw a sketch of what u want to pixel and then fix all pose issues.
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« Reply #2 on: May 29, 2011, 04:22:20 AM »

Its true that i didn't draw the skeleton first, i just started drawing the whole image at once, however, i didn't knew it showed  Embarrassed

Also, i'm not trying to pat myself on the back here, but does this piece "show" that its made by a beginner, or does it look "better than you would expect form a beginner"?

Because its the first thing i've drawn in about two years, and all i could draw before that were ugly ass tiles Tongue.
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« Reply #3 on: May 29, 2011, 04:35:04 AM »

It looks better than average "my first pixelart" for sure  Wink
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« Reply #4 on: May 29, 2011, 05:14:29 AM »

What would be the best path for me to follow now?
i think i'll look into skeletons for now, however, i'm afraid that i don't know what else there is to learn about coloring. and this piece consist only of "basic rules".

I think i'll just try things (thats why its called art Tongue).

And yes, i was a programmer before this, but i wanted to make something worthwhile, instead of ugly stuff :p
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« Reply #5 on: May 29, 2011, 12:36:53 PM »

It's not just about the anatomy of the skeletons, but also about poses. Learn to put more of a dynamic/action feeling into your poses, it'd improve the overall look of your sprites a lot Smiley
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