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[Zulli]

I've already posted in the show you PA work topic but I think here is a better place for being helped.
I have this BnW squid and I really dont think that this lineart is cool. The problem is that im totally out of ideas on how to improve it.


I'd be really glad if you can help me

[Sakar]

The only things that stand out are:

- The tentacles look like they should connect to the body
- The far left tentacle has straight spots that make it look unnatural

[Zulli]

Oh, thanks Sakar. What you pointed is totally true.
I've tried remaking the left tentacle and connecting them to the body.
What about now?



But Im still not comfortable with his head. I dont really know what to do with it

[QOG]

Oh, thanks Sakar. What you pointed is totally true.
I've tried remaking the left tentacle and connecting them to the body.
What about now?



But Im still not comfortable with his head. I dont really know what to do with it

The thickness of the tentacles is a bit odd - They should get thinner gradually, not change thickness semi-randomly.
Also, squid (squids? squidi?) do not have eyebrows or mouths on the sides of their bodies. They also need two more tentacles (six total).

[Zulli]

Thanks QOG
I tried to correct the thickness ant add the 2 tentacles that were missing.
The mouth and eybrows are just to make it look evil, not thinking on the real squid.

(removed the 2x because im too lazy to resize it )

[Theophilus]

I thought squid had 10 tentacles - specifically, 8 tentacles and two arms

[Zulli]

Laziness made me not research about squids before trying to make one.
I googled it and Theophilus is right: 8 tentacles 2 arms. I tried to correct it for the second time, what about it now?



Im feeling now happier with the result.