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« Reply #8101 on: September 28, 2012, 08:08:41 PM » |
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« Reply #8102 on: September 28, 2012, 09:54:09 PM » |
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Guy: Give me all of your money.
Chap: You can't talk to me that way, I'M BRITISH!
Guy: Well, You can't talk to me that way, I'm brutish.
Chap: Somebody help me, I'm about to lose 300 pounds!
Guy: Why's that a bad thing?
Chap: I'M BRITISH.
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« Reply #8103 on: September 29, 2012, 11:23:43 AM » |
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« Reply #8104 on: September 29, 2012, 03:16:13 PM » |
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« Reply #8105 on: September 30, 2012, 09:21:51 PM » |
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AMAZON these are some nice designs. I'm loving the rib-cage corset as well as the skull-hat! You should evolve it!
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« Reply #8106 on: October 01, 2012, 11:14:26 AM » |
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the proportions look off to me, her legs are really short compared to her arms i think if you raised the elbow and shortened the arm it would look ace |
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« Reply #8107 on: October 01, 2012, 02:34:05 PM » |
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« Reply #8108 on: October 01, 2012, 05:04:39 PM » |
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« Reply #8109 on: October 01, 2012, 05:32:44 PM » |
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« Reply #8110 on: October 02, 2012, 04:53:32 AM » |
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« Reply #8111 on: October 02, 2012, 11:19:28 AM » |
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There are a couple things that make her seem a little alien. Mostly the face and there is something strange about her abdomen area. I'm not sure what to suggest, but you're doing good, just keep practicing. You'll know yourself when it looks correct. You could try some more red or pink in the skin tone too. Maybe contrast that with clear marks of dirt if you were going for a dirty-from-war-look. C:
I would also say the pose could be a lot more interesting and dynamic. Most of her body is in one straight line (from her right leg through her head), and her right arm is perpendicular to that line. I like the dynamism of the thrusting pose, but you can make the rest of her body enhance it. The right arm also seems too small, a change of pose might show that as foreshortening or let you clear it up somehow.
The quality of the brush strokes is working everywhere but her skin and I don't know what to suggest for that either.
As far as my preferences go (You can ignore these without a thought): I like the dreads minus the pony tail or the one-big-dread at the back. I would do more clothes and also armour. She could have rounder thighs, calves and forearms. I would also not put a red loin-cloth between a lady's legs if it's all she's wearing.
Otherwise I like it. If you want a pose suggestion, I can do a paint-over for it.
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« Reply #8113 on: October 02, 2012, 11:58:15 AM » |
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i got a problem, i don't know what do now:  if anyone wants to render it or show stages, tips. that'll be amazing. |
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« Reply #8114 on: October 02, 2012, 01:32:42 PM » |
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well you got a really cool siluette, just keep going! what i would do is to get a even darker colour and do a thin outline of the whole thing. it will make it pop more. then put some lighter colours as glowing details, such as eyes or lamps.
you got good shapes to work with already, so try to take it further and then post your progress! really like the head part and the little dude standing next to it!
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« Reply #8115 on: October 02, 2012, 09:58:35 PM » |
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« Reply #8116 on: October 03, 2012, 10:29:54 AM » |
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« Reply #8117 on: October 03, 2012, 01:45:29 PM » |
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« Reply #8118 on: October 04, 2012, 09:47:55 AM » |
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« Reply #8119 on: October 04, 2012, 07:52:17 PM » |
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this is awesome and i had to post. i'm assuming the brain was intentional, because it absolutely sold the piece. |
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