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[Trevor Dunbar]

composed in home studio using the yamaha Mu100 synth

World map one-
http://trevordunbar.com/Music/WorldMap1.mp3


Jazzy Owl-
'Jazz' piece, just messing around. Kind-of a mess, oh well.
http://trevordunbar.com/Music/JazzyOwl_WIP.mp3

[Nate Kling]

sounds pretty good had some nice parts.  Only thing I would critique is that its a little bit all over the place and i would have liked it a bit more structured with a bit more repetition to get a good hook.  Very close to being amazing, nice choice in instruments too.

[jute]

I disagree.  There's no need to use repetition to create a hook when the piece is designed to loop.  This sounds (and the game looks) quite nice to me.

[Nate Kling]

I disagree.  There's no need to use repetition to create a hook when the piece is designed to loop.  This sounds (and the game looks) quite nice to me.

I only mean repetition as in structure, i listened to the song with fresh ears again today and i can follow it a bit better today.  I think the beginning has a great catchy part too it but there are few notes there near the end of the first section that throw me off abit(after the 6th beat in in I think).  The more I listen to it the easier it is for me to follow , all around good track either way.  It just feels like it starts running around all over the place a bit, could just be personal preference,though.

[Trevor Dunbar]

'Illuminate' WIP

http://trevordunbar.com/Music/Illuminate_WIP.mp3