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[m3xican]

Published today on the game website, it's also available on

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This is the first trailer I made in my career, so any feedback/comment is welcome.

[chris_b]

It's OK - but I think you should just overlay the text info rather than keep cutting away from the gameplay to a black background.

[m3xican]

Thanks! That's been suggested by few people, I'll keep it in my mind when doing the next trailer

[Sorano]

Looks interesting! I can't say I feel any affection for Impact font. In all honesty I didn't understand the gameplay shown in the trailer at all. I love your thematic.

[m3xican]

Thanks

This first trailer was intended to be more a teaser than a launch trailer, gameplay will be better explained soon

[Alex May]

I think it's looking good man, the graphics are workinga lot better than I thought they would!

[m3xican]

thanks dude, things looks even better when playing (video codec and compressions kill the colors a bit).

Are u having fun with PSN stuff?

[Blackcorn]

It teases my curiosity, because I just can't figure out how the gameplay works. Do you plan to have a beta test before the release? If you do, I would be glad to test your game.

[m3xican]

I'm glad to read that
A closed beta is planned for the end of the month, keep an eye on the game website for updates

[I_smell]

I liked the text, up until NOWADAYS, THE UNDERGROUND IN THE BIG CITIES IS LIKE PLAYING A GAME...
Like that's obviously the idea, you don't have to spell it out.
A lot of the text after that was really cliche stuff you'd see on the back of an old Sega megadrive box: Who's gonna be THE UNDERGROUND MASTER? for example.
COMPLETE DIFFERENT MISSIONS AND MAKE MORE MONEY is just redundant, because that's how all games work. That's not a very exciting feature at all, it just means WHEN YOU BEAT A LEVEL, THINGS WILL HAPPEN.

In the gameplay I couldn't tell what was going on or what you actually do in this game. Do you drive the trains? Do you control the tracks? Do you ride the trains? I think you should've what the objective of the game was in a really easy level, then showed it slowly getting more and more complex, like the trailers for Portal or something.

[m3xican]

I liked the text, up until NOWADAYS, THE UNDERGROUND IN THE BIG CITIES IS LIKE PLAYING A GAME...
Like that's obviously the idea, you don't have to spell it out.
A lot of the text after that was really cliche stuff you'd see on the back of an old Sega megadrive box: Who's gonna be THE UNDERGROUND MASTER? for example.
COMPLETE DIFFERENT MISSIONS AND MAKE MORE MONEY is just redundant, because that's how all games work. That's not a very exciting feature at all, it just means WHEN YOU BEAT A LEVEL, THINGS WILL HAPPEN.

"THE UNDERGROUND MASTER" wanted to be more ironic than epic but yeah, I do agree, the text was not really inspired, probably it's the worst thing in the whole trailer.
I'll try to put more effort in it for the next one