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Title: Poem Thread
Post by: Whiteclaws on August 18, 2013, 11:29:19 AM
Bed bugs,
Dead bugs,
Rotting chunks of flesh.
Dead flies,
Meat pies,
Standing on your chest.

Black hair,
Death stare,
Never does she scream.
Black braid,
Death's maid,
Nothing but a dream.


Title: Re: Poem
Post by: Capntastic on August 18, 2013, 11:41:56 AM
It's a
poem, dude!


Title: Re: Poem
Post by: Stimor on August 18, 2013, 11:49:39 AM
cats are neat, they cant be beat


Title: Re: Poem
Post by: Eigen on August 18, 2013, 12:45:00 PM
I used to write a lot of poems in my native language, but not so much in English. Translating is hard.

manparts, ladyparts?
no matter, fits like a puzzle


Title: Re: Poem
Post by: Conker534 on August 18, 2013, 12:46:47 PM
hello
jello


Title: Re: Poem
Post by: Dr. Cooldude on August 18, 2013, 12:48:39 PM
Der var engang en abe
den boede i en skov
og den ku' svinge sig fra gren til gren
og ta' bananer.
Såd'n når den - bum -
rendte rundt og laved' sjov.


Title: Re: Poem
Post by: Blambo on August 18, 2013, 07:21:03 PM
Danish sounds awesome no matter how silly the subject


Title: Re: Poem
Post by: Eigen on August 18, 2013, 09:28:05 PM
Inimesed naeravad mul näkku,
kui ütlen hobiks "ma riistvõimlen",
tahaks kiirelt pista plehku,
aga vahel hoopis vastu sõimlen.
Arvavad vist et olen homorastne,
küljes riista katsumise maine,
on küll liigesed elastsed,
kuid kodus siiski ootab naine.




Google translates this ... well, somewhat ... but the wordplay doesn't translate at all. Riistvõimlemine means gymnastics on those metal bars and rings on ropes. Riist- is basically a dick in slang. See where I was going with this? :eyebrows:

People laugh at me in the face,
hobby when I say "I riistvõimlen"
'd quickly shove amok,
However, instead of the slang.
I guess I think that homorastne,
adhering dick touching reputation
Although the joints are flexible,
but at home, still woman waits.


Title: Re: Poem
Post by: Evan Balster on August 18, 2013, 10:00:28 PM
Silver-eyed and silver-tongued, the watching Osporidium.
O'er abbatoirs it keeps its wretched post.
Its grating sings the slain to sleep; its knife-keen gaze the mem'ries keep.
Among who pass, it sees the end of most...


Title: Re: Poem
Post by: Impmaster on August 19, 2013, 02:05:16 AM
Oooh, Evan, that sounds pretty good. Unless one of the words I don't know actually changes the whole thing into a joke.


Title: Re: Poem
Post by: Whiteclaws on August 19, 2013, 05:15:47 AM
Keep em' coming , let's make this post the poem thread


Title: Re: Poem Thread
Post by: Evan Balster on August 19, 2013, 08:59:29 AM
A shapeless figure, locked away
Inside a realm it godly sways
To weave in light and shadow there
A living, moving world from air
And nightly does it host a guest
Who comes and goes at own behest
And time to time might seize the throne
To make the place a toy its own
And on the morn to leave the mess
Its keeper cleans, without protest
For lonely is the weaving-hand
The breaking one's its only friend


Title: Re: Poem Thread
Post by: Stimor on August 19, 2013, 11:47:45 AM
a dog is not a pony, whatever happened to kony?


Title: Re: Poem Thread
Post by: Dr. Cooldude on August 19, 2013, 11:48:33 AM
a dog is not a pony, whatever happened to kony?

winner


Title: Re: Poem Thread
Post by: Evan Balster on August 20, 2013, 02:42:34 PM
A flash of insight tears into my mind,
And for a moment, through a sea of black,
A brilliant light that nearly strikes me blind --
I seize for something I might carry back.

And to the mortal world a filament
Of intuition's world is strangely sent.
As brilliant as it be it seems a ghost
Before the whole a breath ago so close.

And to black oceans I will not return,
Through force or wish or poison of the mind.
Each step between these worlds is to be earned!
For precious are the treasures one might find.

The hist'ry books will praise the cunning thief,
Mere seconds in a lifetime spends beneath.


Title: Re: Poem Thread
Post by: Blambo on August 20, 2013, 05:10:17 PM
+1000 for sonnet!


Title: Re: Poem Thread
Post by: Liza on August 21, 2013, 01:51:48 AM
Give me my pie
Or you'll have to die.


Title: Re: Poem Thread
Post by: Schoq on August 21, 2013, 07:30:07 AM
oh shit, I wrote a poem once:

 sunrise in the west
 traveling to new places
 hoping for the best


it's a haiku that rhymes, pretty sure that's worth extra points??


(you're supposed to listen to this song (http://labbed.net/music/Western%20Dawn.mp3) while reading it!)


Title: Re: Poem Thread
Post by: Kekskiller on August 21, 2013, 05:19:17 PM
summer rain

a cloudy spire of midsummer grace
destined to rule in a sudden

where it belongs is not yet known
but still, fate imagined it's place

inmidst all grues - it shall sing
a song of silence and fame

so on they tell, knowing of end
for the deaf will hear
for the blind will see
a thunder beyond embrace


Title: Re: Poem Thread
Post by: Evan Balster on August 21, 2013, 10:48:25 PM
There is work to do
Ambition fights contentment
Happiness can wait


Title: Re: Poem Thread
Post by: Stimor on August 22, 2013, 03:52:24 AM
Come crawling faster
Obey your master
Your life burns faster
Obey your master

Master

Master of puppets


Title: Re: Poem Thread
Post by: Whiteclaws on August 22, 2013, 10:25:07 AM
It's my turn
to return
from the dead
With Ed
Brains
Here comes the train


Title: Re: Poem Thread
Post by: Dr. Cooldude on August 22, 2013, 11:13:18 AM
It's my turn
to return
from the dead
With Ed
Brains
Here comes the train

That was deep mang


Title: Re: Poem Thread
Post by: Schoq on August 22, 2013, 12:07:05 PM
There is work to do
Ambition fights contentment
Happiness can wait
couldn't help but think of http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zPRWuegS8l8


Title: Re: Poem Thread
Post by: Whiteclaws on August 22, 2013, 12:11:32 PM
It's my turn
to return
from the dead
With Ed
Brains
Here comes the train

That was deep mang

I'm the master of poems , it's not like I found the first one on reddit tho !


Title: Re: Poem Thread
Post by: Evan Balster on August 22, 2013, 12:13:54 PM
couldn't help but think of http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zPRWuegS8l8

Thank you this changed my life now when death comes I will be ready


Title: Re: Poem Thread
Post by: Eigen on August 28, 2013, 03:47:01 AM
O Tigsource, O Tigsource,
why art thou so magnificent,
O Tigsource, O Tigsource,
you make rhyming difficult.


Title: Re: Poem Thread
Post by: Whiteclaws on August 28, 2013, 10:34:11 AM
O Tigsource, O Tigsource,
why art thou so magnificent,
O Tigsource, O Tigsource,
you make rhyming difficult.

Goty 2013


Title: Re: Poem Thread
Post by: Crescent on August 30, 2013, 05:31:53 AM
Slumb'ring in a dark abode
Deep below the earthen roads
't toss and turn to visions hate
Of lust, of rage, of hands of fate
It sees not air, nor earth, nor sun
Not war, not famine, not wounded ones
The silence tells a greater tale
Than broken skin, cold and pale
And whence it crack those sullen eyes
its fingers shall unfurl
't bringeth forth a new demise
to the unsuspecting world


Title: Re: Poem Thread
Post by: Stimor on August 31, 2013, 10:40:31 PM
a red rose is red
a violet is a giveaway
sugar is bad for me
and so are you


Title: Re: Poem Thread
Post by: Evan Balster on September 04, 2013, 11:11:48 AM
What bows will not so eas'ly break.
Who laughs at chance will be its friend.
We follow but the roads we take;
We take but those from our way wend.

How wise were men to sail the air,
and not to forge against its flow!
We deviate by just a hair,
And nature takes us where we go.

The world is very like the sea,
With winds by different names and forms.
To master them, they master me.
To fly, I let myself be borne.

How foolish, to consign to hap!
And how things fall into my lap!


-- A tribute to a beloved book of mine, the Tao Teh Ching.


Title: Re: Poem Thread
Post by: Stimor on September 05, 2013, 11:03:43 AM
some like ac
some like dc
thomas edison is a dick


Title: Re: Poem Thread
Post by: Evan Balster on September 07, 2013, 10:06:48 PM
My hand has no claws
because it is for building...
Harder than breaking.


Title: Re: Poem Thread
Post by: Stimor on September 16, 2013, 01:01:25 PM
a b c d e f g
thats not a word
you lose at scrabble


Title: Re: Poem Thread
Post by: Evan Balster on September 18, 2013, 12:36:39 AM
To learn compassion,
cast away your prejudice,
and look very close.


Title: Re: Poem Thread
Post by: Whiteclaws on September 18, 2013, 11:36:01 AM
My face is suffering
My belly is crying
My ass is burning

Workouts...