The correct answer

Aaaaaaaaand DONE.

Nice work Panurge! Fast and precise. I think there may be a spot for you in the Ministry.

[You Look Honest]

I also threw some documents around, and I personally dont like how the documents move out from "under the desk view" to the open area. Maybe you could do it so that you can drag the closed document to the open area and if you release it there, it opens up?? Meanwhile, I`m really looking forward to this game.

Well damn. That's one of the things I was quite happy with. You don't have to drop the document first before seeing it on the desk. Makes quicklooks easy and enables placing it right the first time if you decide to inspect it. I thought it was kinda cool how it dragged straight across but I concede now that maybe it's a little weird.

You Look Honest
New build:


I've added initial versions of the rulebook, audio transcript, and telex dispatch. I've also hard-coded a traveler so you can poke around in his documents a bit. There's nothing to do except that actually. Haven't gotten to the part where you approve/deny his entry.

This is early days so it's all very rough. There's no story, interesting accouterments, or fun. A lot of stuff is incomplete and confusing which I realize is a bad introduction to the mechanics. The final version will build up gradually and introduce these concepts with glorious clarity. For now, study the rulebook first.

Challenge!
The traveler in this build has 4 errors in his documents. The first person to find and post them here will get a free copy of the game when it's released! Please use a tiny font to avoid spoilers.

[Wanted Criminals]

Thanks for the feedback everyone!

* What if I allow everyone into the country? Are there any penalties for doing that? If so, what are they.
* What happens if I don't allow anyone into the country? I mean a total blockade.
* As the player, what is the end goal? I mean, at what point is the game considered completed.

I think the gameplay will probably be divided into days with daily quotas. I'd say your goal is to process people as quickly as possible and not make any mistakes. There'll be a proper narrative and story arc to tie the days together. The low level day-to-day stuff is random within parameters; the story is scripted.

If you don't let anyone through, you'd probably get fired after a few days. If you let everyone through, you'll be responsible for spy/terrorist/smuggler activity. I'm thinking to show performance reports at the end of each day to let you know how you're doing. Some results will be more immediate. For example, a terrorist suicide bomber may detonate onscreen immediately after he passes through your booth. Bad lookin out.

It would also be interesting if the player has to decide whether the picture on the passport is of the same person as the one standing in line.
For even more complexity make the passport picture always appear younger and with a different haircut.

Actually this is exactly what I'm planning. Even with the mockup I found it fun to dart my eyes back and forth at the passport photo and the dude's face. Same person? Possibly... A proper immigration inspector maintains a suspecting, skeptical eye. Changing up the photos with different glasses/hats/clothes/age should keep it interesting. Which leads nicely to...

Wanted Criminals
The computer terminal, when inspected, will display multiple screens that you can flip between. One of these screens will contain a photo list of known spies/terrorists/criminals/smugglers. As you vet each person, don't forget to compare their face against the current bulletin photos. If you find a match, highlight their face and the photo to reveal an "arrest this punk" option.

Some kind of "urgent bulletin" system built on this could create pretty cool Bourne moments too. You may get an urgent bulletin and expect the criminal to show up (in disguise) within the next few minutes or not at all.

Forged Documents
Along with a list of basic regulations, the rule book will also contain samples of many common documents and passport covers from all surrounding countries. It'll be up to you to cross reference these samples to make sure the traveler's documents aren't forgeries. What I like about this is that after a few days, you'll have memorized how the most common docs should look and won't need to waste precious time referencing the rule book.

[First Build!]

Looks rather interesting. I'd have to see how it plays first to make a full assessment when it's done, but I certainly have respect for the unique dynamics.

Thanks Shine and makerimages. After reading this I figured it'd be best to prototype the gameplay ASAP. Instead of spending more time on the animations (which I'm pretty sure will work out ok), I've moved ahead to the core mechanics (some doubt here).

First Build!
In the last couple days I've gotten up and running with HaxeNME. You can "play" the first build here:


Drag And Then Drop
I originally intended to have the documents just be clickable on the left; after which they show up in one of 2 fixed-width columns on the right. Nice and simple. Unfortunately that felt a bit lifeless when I prototyped it. There was also the general problem of space; each document would be limited to 150 pixels wide.

Instead there's now full drag-n-drop across the counter and desk. I think this solves the space problem nicely as you can always shuffle things around to see large documents. It also feels a lot cooler IMO. Much more like actually inspecting a pile of papers and a little bit fun in it's own right.

Haxe/NME
I gotta say, HaxeNME is pretty nice. There are a few quirks but for a non-taxing 2D game it's great so far. With MonoDevelop (on OSX) and the HaxeNME extension there's tab-completion, nice error messages, and one-click building for flash/mac/windows/etc. Some stuff doesn't work quite the same on all platforms but it's as close to write-once/run-everywhere as I've seen.

Curiously, one of the trickier things to get right was the double-size pixel rendering. Flixel makes this easy as it blits everything to it's own sprite, then scales that up. You can do something similar in vanilla HaxeNME but it's not really optimal for the native targets. I ended up scaling the root DisplayObject, snapping pixel locations while dragging, and writing custom functions to generate nearest-neighbor rotated bitmaps at half-res. Also, I'm using a bitmap font class (pxBitmapFont) since rendering .ttfs seems to always have some level of anti-aliasing.

Procedural Generation
I really like procedural generation for puzzle/logic games like this. For one, it keeps the game interesting for me personally during development. For another, it makes generating lots of content much easier. In this case, the travelers will be generated randomly from a set of rules. My next steps will probably be fleshing out the game world and working out what these rules are.

[Rule Book]

This looks awesome! I really liked The Republica Times, looking forward to seeing this develop.

Thanks spolvid. This game will probably have a similar flavor so I hope you enjoy it too.

Slightly updated layout with taller resolution:


Eigen's suggestion prompted me to keep experimenting with the mockup. With a 3:2 aspect, there's room to rearrange the inspection booth a bit and give the doc inspection area more space. Each document can be maximum 150x215 and 2 documents can be visible at any time. Teletex query results, the audio transcript, and the rule book will behave just like documents. This'll be nice for consistency and having the docs side-by-side makes it easier to find and highlight discrepancies. 150x215 is not a lot of space but my feeling is that the docs shouldn't be too complicated so hopefully it works out.

Closeup:


From left to right there's a clock, scale readout, microphone, computer screen, and notebook. Not sure what to do with the clock just yet but there'll probably be some time component to the gameplay. Scale shows the person's weight, mic will show the audio transcript document when clicked, computer screen will show the teletex document when clicked, and the notebook will show the rule book when clicked.

Rule Book
In order to establish the baseline regulations for which documents and information a traveler must have to enter, there's a rule book. This lists things like "Traveler must have an entry permit", "Traveler must be over 18", etc. If a rule is being broken, it can be highlighted for further options. One example would be the "Traveler must be over 18" rule. If you inspect their passport and calculate their age to be < 18, you can select both their passport birthdate and the age rule. This will highlight the discrepancy and open up a teletex query or a question you can ask the traveler.

This looks really good and reminded me a lot of the original prince of persia's characters' running sequence. Are you using rotoscopy as well?

Hah, thanks! No rotoscoping, I just drew those frames by hand. With so few pixels it's pretty easy to iterate on. Now that you mention it though, rotoscopy is exactly the look I'm going for.  I kept thinking "natural" animation but what I want is that classic low-res rotoscoping feel. I'm glad you mentioned this cuz now I know what better to aim for

If your resolution is not set in stone...I hope you don't mind me editing it's just that I've wrestled with limited screenspace a lot.

I was thinking it best to stick to 16:9, but after seeing your mockup I'm not so sure anymore. 3:2 gives a lot more room to work with. I probably don't know enough about what kinds of documents the game will include to decide right now but I'm gonna experiment with 960x640 as you suggest. Thank you for the ideas! I absolutely don't mind you editing the mockup and I really appreciate the help.

Btw, this is exactly the kind of challenge I enjoy. I'll take a limited resolution, palette, or game mechanic over unlimited freedom any day. Given Pioneers resolution and (awesome) palette, I'll bet you're the same way

[Animation]

That's one helluva clever idea for a game. Really looking forward to it!

Thanks Eigen! FWIW, I consider your Pioneers art utterly fantastic so I'm really happy to see you post here.

Animation


I spent some time today with the traveler animations. Wasn't sure if you could get semi-natural idle, walk, run cycles out of a 1-color 8x18 pixel character. Not sure I succeeded but it's close enough for now. Searched around for a good sprite anim editor before settling on Pixen (OSX). To be honest I'm not that happy with it but it's better than Photoshop for animation. My biggest gripe is that there's no way to preview multiple sequences together. Which leads to...

Programming
I think I'll start putting together some code to preview animation sequences. The current animation doesn't look that great yet but I can probably improve it with better tools and more time. To that end I'm gonna dive into HaxeNME and try to get a simple animation previewer up and running. Just need something to load in multiple animated gifs and string them together with individual repeat counts. Or something.

[Action]

More progress on the mockup (slightly too wide for the forum, scroll to see it all):



At the top you can now see the queue of people and several guards. I'm hoping to have all this animate naturally. It'll probably just look like an unholy mess of swimming pixels but I'm gonna try it anyways.

When called, one person will walk into the inspection booth and appear close-up at the bottom. Likewise anyone you approve for entry will visibly leave the booth and walk off to the right. If you reject someone's entry they may be sent home or arrested. In these cases they'll leave the booth back to the left side of the checkpoint. The passageway off the top leads to jail so the plan is to have the guards drag any smugglers/spies/terrorists up there.

Action
I'd like to include a small action element in the game and from this mockup you can kinda see where it would happen. The wall in the middle is quite tall, but not impossible to climb. If one of the travelers gets restless or desperate they may try to run past the guards, scale this wall, and escape into Arstotzka. If they make it over this wall, an action sequence begins where your cursor becomes a sniper crosshair. You'll have about 3 seconds to shoot them with a tranquilizer before the guards on the right open fire. So you get one last chance to save their life. Or maybe they're a suicide bomber and you're really saving the guards from instant death.

Misc
In the inspection screen, I've added the speaker (to ask questions and view the transcript) and the computer teletex handle (to request information from MoA computers and view results). These both show how many items are available.

Issues
Also in this mockup you can see the tight squeeze for the documents window. I really want to be able to inspect 2 docs at a time, but with this layout there's not enough room. Gonna have to think about how to handle that better.

Haha, nice concept. So the whole game will take place in one setting then?

More or less, yeah. There will be some activity in the border checkpoint area at the top, but most of the focus will be in the booth.

If the inspection gameplay works out ok, I'm also thinking of incorporating the contrary mode where you work as a smuggler/spy-chief/terrorist-leader for the enemy state. You'd be assigned tasks ("smuggle 20kg of bullets"), recruit agents to pass through the border, set them up with fake documents, hide contraband on their body (you know where), and send them through the checkpoint. I guess that would take place in a different setting.

A possible extension of that is to have player-created smugglers in the pool of travelers passing through player-controlled inspectors. And THAT... might make a half-decent play-by-day multiplayer game.

Thanks guys.

Panurge, I just played through your Tower of Clavius Boon and loved it. Completely hilarious with great writing. Looking forward to the rest of it.

[Papers, Please]

Papers, Please

>> Release info in the announcement post here <<

Old Stuff

Ever taken an international flight to a foreign country and felt nervous passing through the immigration checkpoint? Papers, Please aims to turn that around and put you in the role of immigration inspector. Instead of working in a nice modern airport booth, you're assigned to the Ministry of Admission in the war-torn dystopian nation of Arstotzka.

The glorious and free country of Arstotzka has just ended a 6-year war with neighboring Kolechia and reclaimed its rightful half of the border town, Grestin. Your job is to control the flow of people entering the Arstotzkan side of Grestin from Kolechia. Among the throngs of immigrants and visitors looking for work are hidden smugglers, spies, and terrorists. Using only the documents provided by travelers and MoA's primitive computer dispatch system you must decide who can enter Arstotzka and who will be turned away or arrested.

Ok, that's the setup. Some elements of this are pretty similar to my other game, "The Republia Times". I'm a sucker for dystopian settings.

Let's have a mockup:


Lookin a bit empty at this point. The enemy country is on the left and your country is on the right. The top of the screen is the actual border checkpoint and the bottom is inside your booth. Travelers will queue on the top left, pass through your inspection building, then on to enter Arstotzka on the top right. People will enter the inspection booth, you click on their documents and vet them by looking for discrepancies, then you either approve their entry visa or deny their crossing (with or without prejudice).

A little closer:


I haven't completely worked out the precise mechanics yet, but it's probably going to boil down to inspecting all the documents and trying to find any two pieces of information that don't match. For example, if a traveler's passport says they weigh 70kgs, but their current measured weight is 74kgs, you have reason to be suspicious. Highlighting these two pieces of information in the UI will open up further options. In this case, you now need to run a metal detector over the guy or even strip search him. Turns out he just gained some weight so he's clear to pass. Enjoy your time in Arstotzka.

Motivation
The last few games I've worked on have been programming-first, art-second. This time I'm going to try to focus on the art. I'm envisioning lots of cool little pixel portraits and documents and not so many technical challenges. A big part of the game is the traveler portraits so I want to spend a fair amount of time creating those. I'm also considering a system to create face variations from my initial drawings. I guess that would be a technical task so we'll see.

More About the Art
I don't have any formal art training so I'm just gonna copy what I see elsewhere. One thing I like about some of the better pixel-art games is the limited palette. Instead of choosing a global palette though, I'm going to try limiting individual objects or backgrounds to ~3 shades. That's not a hard rule and if it doesn't look good I'm flexible. You can already see a few places in the mockup like that.

For the initial version of the game I'm going to do everything in mid-res pixel art. Pixel art is just way easier, faster, and more enjoyable for me. When it comes to most commercial games however I think pixel art may not be a good choice. It works great for indies and people close to the scene, but my feeling is that most mainstream players prefer a smoother non-pixelated look. I've made some rough experiments with converting the small character portraits to full vector images and they don't look half bad. If I decide to turn this in to a commercial game it's possible I'll do that for all the art. I kinda did the same thing with Helsing's Fire and that turned out ok.

Technical
I've got a really sweet custom C++ engine built on SDL just sitting here but I'm planning to use HaxeNME for this project. I've done 2 flash games before and really like the fact that they're so easy for others to play. HaxeNME looks interesting and is a slight hedge on this game getting good enough to sell as a native app. Actually I'm a full-time indie developer so I'm really hoping to sell the game when it's done. If it's any good. Next point..

DevLog
I've made a bunch of games but never kept a devlog before. I'll do my best to keep this thread updated with screenshots and builds. I don't expect the entire game to take more than a few weeks months to develop. I'll probably edit that sentence out in a few months. Any feedback is appreciated.

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There are updates throughout the thread, but I'll just put this here:

>> Get the Latest Build <<

(Currently in beta so missing some stuff)

______________________________________________________________________

Want your name in the game?

I'm including real names for the immigrants. Add yours here:


dukope.com/usemyname

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Papers, Please on Steam Greenlight

Please vote!

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This. Looks. Amazing.

How are you maintaining the VIC restrictions on the programming side? Or is it just an art decision?

Really looking forward to playing.

[6 Degrees of Sabotage]

Hi again. Had a great time with LD48 and thought to post my entry here.
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6 Degrees of Sabotage

One hour ago, a bomb exploded at the mayor's rally.

We have gathered intelligence that implicates the Clockmaker as the mastermind behind the attack. However, the Gambler was seen placing the bomb at the rally. We believe the Clockmaker does not personally know the Gambler.
 
There is a network of saboteurs disguised among groups of innocent citizens. Bomb instructions were passed between multiple pairs of saboteur acquaintances.

Review the security tapes from today to track the note and uncover the saboteurs.
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This game is based on the exciting concept of small world networks. Your task is to deduce the connections between groups of people with limited information. Then you shoot those links in the head.

Like my other quick game, The Republia Times, this one is somewhat non-traditional.

Play Online (Flash)
Ludum Dare Entry Page

Thanks for the comments. I'm glad you liked it   

One of the iterations I tried had more involved stats for your readers (morale, lawfulness, trust) but it was a too overwhelming for a 2-day project. If I did a proper expanded version, I could go back and try that again with more time.

And as you both say, there's some good potential for an expanded story with more scripted events and plot forks.

That's not a glitch.

Really? What's the purpose of it?

Foreshadowing!

I spent a few more hours today polishing this.

Added music, sound effects, gameplay tweaks and some flavor images. Same link.

[The Republia Times]

Hello,

Been away from games for a bit and I wanted to try out something quick in preparation for LD48.

I've made a bunch of games before (Helsing's Fire, Mightier, etc), but this is my first quickly-developed game and my first Flash game. Flash debugging sucks nuts but otherwise I had fun. Flixel is great.

Like LudumDare proper, this is a 2-day project with some rough edges. If anything doesn't work or isn't fun, I have multiple built-in excuses.

The Republia Times
You've just been assigned the editor-in-chief position at The Republia Times in the glorious and free nation of Republia. You must use your influence to print positive articles that paint Republia in a good light.

Play it online
(Or download the source. There are two endings)



(<3 Mac Plus)

The music in the trailer is totally rocking. I really like the look of the game, but the music tipped my hand. Purchased.

I got this and really enjoy it. It somehow seems slightly easier to play than the windows version. But I also had trouble on a few of the videos. It seems like clips where the motion doesn't move linearly off (or onto) the screen are the hardest. For example:

- The girl (?) on the swing
  She never goes off the right side and her movement slows and reverses. It's very hard to know at which point is the "extreme right"  that is cued to the motion.

- The man closing the coffin
  He both slams the coffin shut and continues to walk left. Either of these motions could be the key one. I believe it's actually the coffin, but the way the man walks offscreen to the left makes it confusing.

- The footrace with multiple runners
  There are many runners moving right to left, and they're all spread out. Which one is the key mover, I still don't know.

- The parrot (?) on the snare drum
  There's so many things moving and none of them is the clear key mover. This is cool for variety, but now I have to figure out which and when instead of just when.

For these and a few others, I found the only way to advance was to repeatedly tap the movie for an instant to pause it, then let it play a full loop. Repeat until it matches.

The public domain videos have a really nice charm to them, but I think you could vastly improve the sense of singular, linear movement by cropping and time-stretching some of these clips. For example: cropping the swing girl so that she actually goes offscreen on the right, and playing with the speed to make it clear when her leftward motion begins.

All that sounds negative, but I'm really impressed with the originality of this game. I've never seen anything like it and it's just refreshing. The playback of all the clips when you finish is a nice reward. I played a few rounds on infinite and all the sounds and loops really become hypnotic after a while.

(Hi Nicolai!)

I can't say anything about the game itself, but I really like the art. Nice work.

I enjoyed this a lot. Thanks for making it.

The mood is really well done and the music is fantastic.

For the puzzles, only #8 gave me some trouble. The image in the book doesn't match the actual environment (intentional?), so it took me a long time to first pinpoint the location, then to try everything possible related to it.

Also, Rocky Memphis kicks ass. I played through that game as well when it was released and loved it.