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[Mir@k]

Sorry for my bad english!

Last time i posted here i was given excellent critique, once again, thank you all.

People told me to make another song (and a better website) and gave me lots of pointers to make it even better than the last one. I joined a game dev team that needed a musician for their game, and this is the final result of my latest piece:

http://www.pattytto.com/?p=92

It's my longest track so far. I know that, compared to most experts, it's still too short but i did give it my best. This song is used on a "tutorial" kind of stage, where you learn all the moves you can use ingame. Is placed in a kinda calm, peaceful and bright forest.

Ah, and yes, now i have a decent website. I don't know why i didn't use wordpress before.
http://www.pattytto.com 

Comments truly appreciated.

[Ishi]

I really like that, sounds like quality games music as far as I'm concerned. A good beginning-of-game motivational sound.

I like the other music on your site too, though like you say some of it is a little short.

Also you're english seems to be fine

[SeraphicPanoply]

Lots of cool stuff on your page. I liked all your tracks too. 

[Craig Stern]

I like this track. It reminds me a bit of the

from Zelda - A Link to the Past.

My only piece of constructive criticism is that the mix sounds rather muddy. If this were my track, I'd reduce the bass levels and use panning to differentiate the different instruments.

[supershigi]

I can totally imagine this matching a "tutorial" stage as you mentioned, it's very peaceful and unobtrusive.  The flute and 8th notes strings do give it a "foresty" feel as well.