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[-Frikman-]

recoloured rolling spikes. i don't like too much the eyes of the new kid. they seem a bit weird 

[Karuvitomsk]

Cape gave me trouble. Might try again later.

[thewojnartist]

Cape gave me trouble. Might try again later.

As good as it looks, I can't quite recognize it as the Kid. It seems to be more based off of the artwork than the pixelated player. But hey, what do I know? Besides, it is up to Soulliard.

P.S. The Lightning is great.

[falsion]

Looks pretty good to me. This sprite is much more detailed, the pose is less stiff and overall it looks closer to the Indie Brawl style. The only thing that looks different is the hair, but that's because Kayin never really bothered to draw the hair correctly in the original sprite.

Maybe if you really wanted to, you could give him more hair on the back and a little less hair on top. The original sprite kinda looks like it has a mullet. Nah, forget it. Dumb idea. It looks good to me.

[Sir Raptor]

Your sprite needs a bit more of a visible cape, but otherwise I love it.

[thewojnartist]

The only thing that looks different is the hair

Yeah, I guess that was what was bothering me.

[Soulliard]

That looks very nice.

[Veo]

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[mokesmoe]

Aside from the cape, I like the other one better.

[Winterous]

Cape gave me trouble. Might try again later.

I don't really like the kid, but I suppose it does fit IB more.
It just doesn't look as round and hyperactive as the in-game sprite.

The lightning looks great though, all it needs is some cool animation and explosion effects and it'll be perfect!

[-Frikman-]

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oh god the excess of colour and detail is so beutiful that is going to make my eyes explode! keep going like that 

[falsion]

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I don't like it at all. Way too saturated and the hair looks way too crazy. I can't even recognize who he's supposed to be now.

Just add a cape to the other one and it's fine.

[-Frikman-]

what you talkin' about? the new one has a bigger head conpared to his body, that way it looks closer to the original sprite. maybe the cape is too straight and long but that can be easily fixed.
see? wasn't hard.

[falsion]

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The first one resembles the original sprite more to me. It also looks closer to the Indie Brawl style.

The second one uses pillow shading, which doesn't look good compared to the first one, which actually makes careful use of colors (much like the other sprites in IB). The pillow shading also makes his face look too round, where the first one matches the "flatness" of the original sprite. Plus his hair is neither that spiky in the game nor in his artwork. The first one does a good job of striking a balance between the two.

[JMickle]

apart from the hair, it looks really really good to me. make the hair less spiky yourself if you want

[Karuvitomsk]

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[MaloEspada]

That eye creeps me out. Same goes for the month. I think it's okay to take some libertities and just give him a smile, and not an open mouth?
Maybe when he attacks he opens his mouth or something.

Random blurps of thought.

[falsion]

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Awesome! I like it.


@rdein: I like it like that, it resembles the original sprite. In his artwork, he always has his mouth open too. I guess his mouth being all black kinda makes it look weird though. But here, how's this?



I added a subtle bit of red to it, just enough to keep it close to the original.

[Karuvitomsk]

Really small change.

[falsion]

There we go, that looks much better.