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[XRA]

Sturdy well-oiled hinges glide willingly as a vertical band of light swiftly unfurls through the featureless void, racing upwards it expands into a luminous rectangle slouched against the wall.  After resting there a moment its motion reverses and is carefully wiped away, the thick drone of electronic activity that hangs implacable within the walls is swallowed once again, the mechanical locks engage with a dull loyal click.

[filosofiamanga]

I mentioned this in another thread, but I'm writing a Kafkaesque Gonzo-styled espionage ...
...I'm not really sure what to think of it. I can't decide if the plot is stupid or if my writing sucks. haha.

I think It could work, the idea is not good or bad it's the execution of the idea that counts.
But your story seems very well to fit a survivol horror game (RE 2 of psone) or those Zombie games.

[Renton]

Click the link on my signature. Do eet.

[thewojnartist]

It thought this belonged in the Design forum, but apparently this is where I should post this for feedback (even though I probably won't ever have the budget to execute this idea) So here's my first High-Concept Game Design Document.

http://www.mediafire.com/?2zr4nbqbd69dtpx


Also, I wrote this EXCEEDINGLY DISTURBING AND DESCRIPTIVE HORROR SHORT STORY(I honestly don't know what I was thinking) that has so far horrified a lot of friends and relatives, but some feedback from some TIGSourcers would be nice...but be warned that it has a lot of disturbing imagery that may not be suitable for the faint of heart.

http://www.mediafire.com/?wc4c0nzydmr8c2q