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« Reply #16760 on: February 09, 2012, 06:14:53 PM » |
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« Reply #16761 on: February 09, 2012, 06:22:25 PM » |
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@Miguelito:
Well it is pretty rough and jerky right now so it's hard to tell,
But one thing that I notice is that maybeeee just maybe his head tips too much.
That and his lower half is all messed up. his torso is super long and he has short lil legs and tiny feet.. But maybe that's how you designed him.
But He's nice looking and I'm sure you're heading somewhere awesome with him. He reminds me of this:
Only... a pimp in purple.
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« Reply #16762 on: February 09, 2012, 07:39:59 PM » |
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I'm working on a game with my girlfriend doing the art. She has more of a background in illustration so we were wondering if someone could give her some feedback on the main character sprite so far! Here it is:  Thanks!  |
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« Reply #16763 on: February 09, 2012, 08:25:16 PM » |
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Yet another WIP, thought I'd share it here for any feedback. Thanks!  The grey background is just temporary, it'll be transparent and it's meant for pixeljoints default grey background. |
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Blah Blah Blah <3
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« Reply #16764 on: February 09, 2012, 08:26:54 PM » |
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Work in progressssssss Beautiful <3 |
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« Reply #16765 on: February 10, 2012, 12:04:15 AM » |
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Yet another WIP, thought I'd share it here for any feedback. Thanks!
Shit this is looking cool. The blood should be a bit darker and dripping if there's that much of it, and blend a little more unless he's just gently put his hands inside a fresh cadaver. Actually rendering the shape of the claws would be an idea too. |
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« Reply #16766 on: February 10, 2012, 07:02:35 AM » |
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@Kyuur: Good start! It's looking quite flat though, and the pose is very stiff. Try to make her more relaxed in the pose and add some feeling of weight. Make the pose a bit uneven so that both arms and both legs are visible. Good luck!  @Delicious: Daaaeeeeemn! Looking really badass! I think the pants blend in too much with the fur.  Haters gonna hate
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Lefty-concepty, righty-pixley, but bothey programmey.
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« Reply #16767 on: February 10, 2012, 10:04:59 AM » |
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This is awesome. Not enough people draw werewolves |
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« Reply #16768 on: February 10, 2012, 10:32:57 AM » |
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Hiya, some critique please?
This is a WIP, traditional animation to be turned into pixel art. It's really rough still.
Do you see any parts that seem fundamentally flawed, or could be improved? Thanks!
The crotch of his pants is practically at his knees, which looks odd because the pants don't seem baggy/oversized otherwise, and his right foot doesn't really exist. |
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« Reply #16769 on: February 10, 2012, 11:13:45 AM » |
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Thank you. I was hoping to try something more difficult than no clothing/skin-tight clothes, hence I somehow decided to give him a zoot suit. I'm just hoping the pants will look somewhat stretchy. I'm not looking forward to doing folds and creases... :/ |
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« Reply #16770 on: February 10, 2012, 12:17:08 PM » |
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Work in progressssssss Oh my sweet jesus, what is this? I love it! |
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« Reply #16771 on: February 10, 2012, 12:21:45 PM » |
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Work in progressssssss Oh my sweet jesus, what is this? I love it! Just some pattern practicing for fun. |
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« Reply #16772 on: February 10, 2012, 12:42:57 PM » |
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Aaah more awesome stuff every new page.  Practicing my billowing. No context will be given. |
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« Reply #16773 on: February 10, 2012, 02:34:26 PM » |
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Work in progressssssss Everything you draw makes me feel warm and fuzzy inside. EDIT: And another one whilst I posted!  |
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« Reply #16774 on: February 10, 2012, 02:48:34 PM » |
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« Reply #16775 on: February 10, 2012, 02:49:48 PM » |
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« Reply #16776 on: February 10, 2012, 02:52:52 PM » |
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Aaah more awesome stuff every new page. Practicing my billowing. No context will be given. :D Looks pretty awesome. @Alec S. Nice tiles. Grass looks a little thick on the areas by itself, but the rest is pretty good. |
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« Reply #16777 on: February 11, 2012, 02:03:16 AM » |
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Aaah more awesome stuff every new page. Practicing my billowing. No context will be given. I really dig this. The colors pop a lot more than the blue and white version, and he has a much clearer stance. |
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« Reply #16778 on: February 11, 2012, 11:09:07 AM » |
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Thanks guys! Really appreciate the critics and compliments. Hiya, some critique please? This is a WIP, traditional animation to be turned into pixel art. It's really rough still. Do you see any parts that seem fundamentally flawed, or could be improved? Thanks! Thought I'd bump this up, it didn't get as much shine as it should. Waist is really low and torso is very long, and I think that's why I love this. Can't wait to see this rendered!  |
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« Reply #16779 on: February 11, 2012, 11:21:34 AM » |
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