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[Rat Casket]

Face 2 is great.

Face 1 is really good too but 2 just feels right.

[gggfhfdh]

or,

even though this is definitely cuter/moe-er* I think the elongated face with the nose has more personality! I'd suggest making the original's head one pixel taller (without changing the positions of the eyes) so that she gets a more believable head (hair has volume, after all)

The body edit is quite great, though, I recommend taking a good look at that!

*please forgive me lord

oh yeah, definitely
I mostly made the edit to show how to use such a tiny amount of space better and neglected the face for the most part

mono's latest edit pretty much hits the nail on the head. i'm not sure how i feel about the eyes cutting into the bangs like they are but that might just be me

[mono]

Cool, we'll see how well I can animate it.

[ANtY]

IMO face 1 is much better

[mono]

You can probably do it better than I did but I think obscuring less of the face gives her more character.

[Forstride]

I personally like face 1 more.

[Udderdude]

I think face 2 fits the style (ohshitohshitohshit) better.

[happymonster]

I did a tweaked version for Face 1:

[gggfhfdh]

oh if we're posting face edits i actually did a few more right before the consensus was "face 2 is best"




e: also

the style (ohshitohshitohshit)

can u not

[Shawny]

in a really pixely mood lately

also felt like remaking a thing

[DustyDrake]

Hey! I was in a pixelly mood too, and felt like remaking a thing!

I took the base sprites of this, and remade them:

[SolarLune]

@DustyDrake - Totally didn't see that it's male and female - thought they were both the same or something at first. The larger version is pretty good, I think.

@Shawny - I like the saturated version for the colors. Add the missing bricks and shading to the colored version, and you've got some sweet art (though they're already sweet). The desaturated one is more muted, of course. I guess it's just about what you're going for with the feel of the game.

[saibot216]

@DustyDrake, nice work! I figure you're going to work on the character sprites more, but as they are now, I like them and they seem cute in a way.

[DustyDrake]

@DustyDrake, nice work! I figure you're going to work on the character sprites more, but as they are now, I like them and they seem cute in a way.

Actually, I like them too, I altered the male pose some thought to be a bit 'stronger', though. It seemed a bit bland before.


V3, with more characters and character

[poe]

in a really pixely mood lately

also felt like remaking a thing

So awesome! If I ever want to make an RPG I'm contacting you.

[Cellusious]

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[poe]

That looks amazing! I could see it being used for a platformer style farming game.

[Cellusious]

That looks amazing! I could see it being used for a platformer style farming game.

no you make something, i don't want to. :3 
//anyone can use that piece for anything they want no credit needed.//

[Delicious]

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The black outline is a bit too much and makes it look cluttered, banding is quite heavy on this as well. Your pixel clusters could use better rendering and the colors are quite unappealing. That's my complete honest opinion.

It's a nice experiment though, and it's definitely something new from your previous work.    

[Cellusious]

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The black outline is a bit too much and makes it look cluttered, banding is quite heavy on this as well. Your pixel clusters could use better rendering and the colors are quite unappealing. That's my complete honest opinion.

It's a nice experiment though, and it's definitely something new from your previous work.   

Yeah, i dunno wtf i was doing with the underground rocks, the upper 48 pixels (dirt, grass, props) looks half ass decent tho?