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« Reply #6160 on: September 19, 2009, 01:21:52 PM » |
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 I think it's way better now. Thank you very much nooks, you made my mind a lot clearer on this matter. Thanks for the feedback guys, you really rock.  Btw, I changed the tree a little and changed its colors too. Is it any better? |
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« Reply #6161 on: September 19, 2009, 01:33:58 PM » |
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That frame when he's suspended in the air kind of bothers me. But looking great nonetheless. |
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« Reply #6162 on: September 19, 2009, 06:33:49 PM » |
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 run, little space guy, run |
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« Reply #6163 on: September 19, 2009, 06:38:41 PM » |
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Malo, those trees are too round. They look kinda like puffy green lollipops, you know? Try making it look more uneven.
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« Reply #6164 on: September 19, 2009, 07:10:21 PM » |
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ehh, I rather like the new trees
I really dislike the sign, though. And the stone that makes up the ground. They're a little too messy and random for the rather geometric clean style of everything else.
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« Reply #6165 on: September 20, 2009, 07:53:45 AM » |
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@Malo I agree with Atnas about the trees. Here's a reference I've got from Google image search:  Good job overall, though. But I really dislike the mountains and sky... are they final? |
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« Reply #6166 on: September 20, 2009, 08:49:48 AM » |
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I dont know if they are final or not; currently i'm satisfied with them but maybe someday i'll rework them. I find them quite simple, but charming
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« Reply #6167 on: September 20, 2009, 06:08:50 PM » |
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working on a title screen. trying only one color for the entire picture.  witch still needs hands, wand, and feet. bat (circle) needs wings. font is possible temporary. after I finish them I will use some colors to suggest an enviroment. |
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« Reply #6168 on: September 20, 2009, 06:12:25 PM » |
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How come the text is all soft and AAed, but the witch and cat are all pixelly MS-Paint style?
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« Reply #6169 on: September 20, 2009, 06:16:33 PM » |
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because someone (who will remain nameless) didn't turn of the AA on the font and now im thinking it looks better.
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« Reply #6170 on: September 20, 2009, 06:18:42 PM » |
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She is sitting on a broom, right? Like, flying.
Gotta agree with Chevy on the Font, maybe if you draw the text and then AA it would look more natural
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« Reply #6171 on: September 20, 2009, 06:35:27 PM » |
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Well, I say either do the drawings and the text nice and soft like the font is now, or re-do the text in the same style your drawings are now.
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« Reply #6172 on: September 20, 2009, 06:40:19 PM » |
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yay consistency
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« Reply #6173 on: September 20, 2009, 09:27:48 PM » |
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 I dunno, is it any better? For now I'll only work on the house.. maybe tomorrow i'll fix the tree I think this looks like a pretty awesome style. Looks kind of like something for an adventure game or something. |
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« Reply #6174 on: September 21, 2009, 12:26:42 AM » |
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working on a title screen. trying only one color for the entire picture. Sorry to say my good sir , but you appear to have exceeded the color-limit  |
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« Reply #6175 on: September 21, 2009, 03:05:00 AM » |
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 I hope you don't mind, but I did an edit of the tree. Right now it doesn't really make sense from a branch size standpoint, and it kinda blends with the background too much. The perspective also seems weird, in that you can see the bottom of the tree but not the house's roof or anything. I think giving it a little more body and color could help out a lot, but it's up to you. The rest looks really nice, I love the background.  |
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« Reply #6176 on: September 21, 2009, 07:14:18 AM » |
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working on a title screen. trying only one color for the entire picture. Sorry to say my good sir , but you appear to have exceeded the color-limit Only a bit. |
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« Reply #6177 on: September 21, 2009, 08:24:09 AM » |
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I hope you don't mind, but I did an edit of the tree. Right now it doesn't really make sense from a branch size standpoint, and it kinda blends with the background too much. The perspective also seems weird, in that you can see the bottom of the tree but not the house's roof or anything. I think giving it a little more body and color could help out a lot, but it's up to you. The rest looks really nice, I love the background. Nice edit Pastel, thank you. I feel like an idiot for messing up with the perspective of the tree like that  |
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« Reply #6178 on: September 21, 2009, 08:27:11 PM » |
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Hey people! Here is some pixel stuff I made for fun. Cat is my avatar/character/signature thing.  I stole the run cycle from KittenEater cos it was too awesome!  Pantsu emote inspired by arne.  |
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« Reply #6179 on: September 21, 2009, 09:55:13 PM » |
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That cat is soo cool
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