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« Reply #680 on: May 15, 2013, 05:48:47 PM » |
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@anty: needs nipples; faces also need touching up. the last one's mouth is placed too low and lips feel too wide, and the nose feels too low (though that may just be a result of not accenting the tip). the second one has too small of a nose/too flat of a face. bodies are okay, but some parts feel too thick while others are too thin. trap is the absolutest form of macho
my influence is spreading.... yes....
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« Reply #681 on: May 15, 2013, 09:07:34 PM » |
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no john no that's imposing beauty standard
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« Reply #682 on: May 15, 2013, 09:20:52 PM » |
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« Reply #683 on: May 15, 2013, 10:45:07 PM » |
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« Last Edit: May 15, 2013, 10:53:45 PM by Gimym TILBERT »
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« Reply #684 on: May 16, 2013, 12:02:12 AM » |
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trap is the absolutest form of macho
my influence is spreading.... yes.... You were probably not even born when I statred walking this path, yo
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« Reply #685 on: May 16, 2013, 07:42:30 AM » |
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You guys are getting awfully critical for a doodles thread
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« Reply #686 on: May 16, 2013, 07:44:43 AM » |
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just some things to brush up on; personally i always want to know how i can improve, in any medium
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« Reply #687 on: May 16, 2013, 08:05:17 AM » |
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ANty: Since her face was a bit longer, she reminded me a bit of an exaggerated Talisa from Game of Thrones
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« Reply #688 on: May 16, 2013, 12:52:59 PM » |
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You guys are getting awfully critical for a doodles thread
it's fine as long as there's some advice along with "it looks like shit" :D ANty: Since her face was a bit longer, she reminded me a bit of an exaggerated Talisa from Game of Thrones hmm, I guess there's some similarity
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« Reply #689 on: May 16, 2013, 04:55:09 PM » |
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She's looking to her left so the pupil lines up with the edge of the mouth. When looking straight, generally speaking the mouth lines up halfway between the pupil and the tear duct.
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« Reply #690 on: May 17, 2013, 04:48:05 AM » |
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She's looking to her left so the pupil lines up with the edge of the mouth. When looking straight, generally speaking the mouth lines up halfway between the pupil and the tear duct.
Exactly! the left side of the panties is wrongly curved, dum
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« Last Edit: May 17, 2013, 09:35:22 AM by ANtY »
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« Reply #691 on: May 17, 2013, 07:27:11 AM » |
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edit: it looks to bad to showcase it
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« Last Edit: May 17, 2013, 04:03:06 PM by ANtY »
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« Reply #692 on: May 17, 2013, 04:02:45 PM » |
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« Reply #693 on: May 17, 2013, 04:06:15 PM » |
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say no to filter (tm) bad use of water color filter x
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« Reply #694 on: May 17, 2013, 04:09:52 PM » |
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At least better than the pre-filter version, I can't draw hair
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« Reply #695 on: May 17, 2013, 04:28:15 PM » |
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Anatomy's good, needs reflected light and value contrast.
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« Reply #696 on: May 17, 2013, 05:01:34 PM » |
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I got carried away. Good start on the last one, anyways. edit:
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« Reply #697 on: May 17, 2013, 05:10:21 PM » |
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more naked boy, girl are watching too lol also can't draw hair = stop using one thickness size
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« Reply #698 on: May 17, 2013, 06:13:30 PM » |
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@Cow: that's a really good edit, I couldn't figure out what to change to make her look not odd, even though I knew she looked not right more naked boy, girl are watching too lol also can't draw hair = stop using one thickness size hmm, stop using what? I don't quite understand btw. are they? Anyway, here's a new version
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« Reply #699 on: May 17, 2013, 06:15:59 PM » |
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I'm happy I was somewhat helpful.
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