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[Kramlack]

Help me make the back look more like an exhaust pipe (along with anything else you might think needs work).

[ink.inc]

Okay, what kind of car is this supposed to be? Station wagon? Or something more futuristic?

[Kramlack]

It's not really a station wagon, just a plain ol' car, and no, nothing futuristic.

[ink.inc]

If it's not a station wagon, make its trunk more... defined.

Station Wagon:


Decent Car:


Also, try moving the exhaust pipe one pixel to the right and two or more pixels up. Exhaust pipes are not supposed to stick out far below the undercarriage.

[moi]

Red lights is all you really need

[J. R. Hill]

  I am adding colors though...

[Oddball]

And add a little puff of smoke from the exhaust.

[P-Flute]

I think the car does a good job of imitating that Rad Racer look.  The red lights would help, like JR did, but I think if you went that direction you'd be best only using them for the outer lights. 

That said, I think adding the red detracts from the somewhat monochromatic nature of the source (like you sort of indicated, JR).  I'd just try moving the exhaust up a few pixels first, see how that looks.