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« on: March 18, 2011, 07:57:02 AM »

So, I have some conceptual arts concerning a group of characters I'm working on. There's about 6 more that I couldn't really get fit into the space left here, and I think between this and some framework done on my Dynamic Music Generator, I'm about to call it a day.



Not really detailed at the moment, and was close to getting another penciled in on the center/left, but the proportions (the head in particular) never did work out right. But what do you think so far? (NOTE: Slash'M Dude, the second guy on the second row, is supposed to be "a short guy," so proportions that guy *is* deliberate.)

EDIT: Since the writing is incomprehensible (not big enough?); here's the character rundown:

(across the top)
ROCK'N GUY
RUSH'N BITCH
CAP'N CRUSH
OL' COLONEL "POP" CORN
SERF'R BABE
ICE'R MANN

(middle left)
ROLL'R GAL
SLASH'M DUDE
(middle right)
ROADIE O'CLOWN
FOX'A WUMINN

(across the bottom)
MINER ZETTBACH
VAVAA VUME & XAXAA XUME
GRITZ LEE BURR
DRAG'N SLURR
SCHORR SCHWINHAUT
GUARD'N FRESH
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« Reply #1 on: March 18, 2011, 08:21:55 AM »

They look decent so far, but most of the characters have no personality. For instance, the character on the last row, second from the right, what are her abilities? What is she like? I feel the you should be able to tell that by looking at them.

Maybe a few more detailed pictures would help some of the artists around here do a sketch.

(BTW, that is a really badass picture, how you just sneaked yourself in there, I can picture you saying, "Read it and weep, mothaf***as.")
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« Reply #2 on: March 18, 2011, 01:35:56 PM »

They look decent so far, but most of the characters have no personality. For instance, the character on the last row, second from the right, what are her abilities? What is she like? I feel the you should be able to tell that by looking at them.

Most of the characters might take some describing, at this point; although they are more fleshed-out in concept than it might appear from this shot. Their abilities are contrived mainly from three sources: a popular gaming protagonist, a MegaMan Robot Master or two, and a fighting style as identified in Street Fighter or King of Fighters, with a little bit of Tekken technical thrown in. For instance:

SCHORR SCHWINHAUT

This tall, firey redhead is pretty full of herself at times, and is not easily impressed with others. As such, she tends to spend a lot of her time by herself; and compensates for her loneliness with further achievement and personal growth, ironically seperating her from others even more. It's kind of a vicious cycle, really.

Special Power: Rock'n Fire
Favorite RMs: HeatMan, TurboMan
Fighting Style: Emperor (inspired by Sagat, Rugal, and Krauser)
Favorite Games: Rogue, King of Fighters, Galaga
Dislikes: Crowded malls, stores, and restaraunts
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I was hoping her back-turned, angsty look did a good enough job of portraying this persona. Kinda going for "if Rugal or Krauser happened to be a hot chick."

I wish I could get a good scan of it! My webcam/lighting kinda sucks. Probably just need to ink it over. Maybe over tonight, sometime.
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« Reply #3 on: March 18, 2011, 01:43:45 PM »

Here's some other personas to compare:

ROCK'N GUY

An inconsistently unemployed "urban adventurer" living day-to-day, Rock'n was born with injured vocal cords. He learned to speak with a guitar, which is what he uses to commumicate with. His first word was "die," but it's not because he's moody or morose, mind you. He just likes tabletop RPGs.

Special Power: Rock'n Recovery (think Rush Search)
Favorite RM: MegaMan, of course!
Fighting Style: Jeet Koon Do (influences include Fei Long, Karin, Kyo 2000, and Law)
Favorite games: MegaMan 2-3, Cave Story, Guitar Hero/Rock Band
Dislikes: Ragequitters
__________

SLASH'M DUDE

Touting a big mohawk, and a big mouth to match, Slash'M is a grouchy midget who's often got the short end of the stick in life. There's nothing small about the guy's ability, though! He's got a thing for tall girls, too.

Special Power: Rock'n Blade
Favorite RMs: ShadowMan, MetalMan
Fighting Style: Ninjitsu (like Ibuki, Heidern, Eiji Kisaragi, Yoshimitsu)
Favorite Games: Strider, Run Saber, Ninja Senki
Dislikes: Bad teeth/breath
__________

RUSH'N BITCH

Quick, petite, and pretty hot; Rush'n seems to always attract plenty of unwanted attention. For this reason, she tends to be a bit of a rude loner that's a little full of herself. She talks to herself a lot. Very few can keep up with her, but those who do may find it to be worth their while.

Special Power: Rock'n Cutter
Favorite RMs: QuickMan, ChargeMan
Fighting Style: Judo (think Abel, Cammy, Blue Mary, Michelle, or Julia)
Favorite Games: Sonic & Knuckles, Mr. Jumper
Dislikes: Old pick-up lines and blonde jokes.
__________

MINER ZETTBACH

A big mighty earthy guy, Miner is a real Mr. Fix-It at heart. He's an honest-hearted dude that loves building stuff, but he's horrible at sticking to budgets or deadlines. Because of this, he's always running out of cash. He also has a soft (fumbly?) spot for damsels in distress. And face it, aren't they all?

Special Powers: Rock'n Block (like a LEGO, not a defensive manuever), Miner Quake
Favorite RMs: GutsMan, StoneMan, ConcreteMan
Fighting Style: Boxing (think Dudley, Rick, Vanessa, and Steve)
Favorite Games: Spelunky, Mr. Driller, Minecraft
Dislikes: Dating, it never turns out well...
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ROLL'R GAL

A mysterious girl who loves to have fun, Roll'r never goes far without her rollerblades on. In spite of her easygoing attitude, she wrestles with inner turmoil about being a nice person who does the right thing. The girl's a math whiz too, and a total clutz whenever she isn't on wheels!

Special Power: Rock'n Ball
Favorite RM: Protoman! (Roll's okay, too.)
Fighting Style: Tae Kwon Do
Favorite Games: Radio Allergy, Burai Fighter DX
Dislikes: Girly stereotypes. And not because they're untrue.
__________

ICE'R MANN

A cool beach bum with a wild, flirtacious streak. He has an affinity for ice cream, and is pretty athletic, but tends to be lazy. In total irony, he gets cold rather easily, and prefers to stay where it's warm.

Special Power: Rock'n Ice
Favorite RMs: FreezeMan, ColdMan
Fighting Style: Aikido (inspired by K', Kula, and Athena)
Favorite Games: Dead or Alive Volleyball, Wii Sports
Dislikes: Wintertime
__________

VAVAA VUME & XAXAA XUME

This pair of trickster twins use their telepathic link to appear to move too fast to see. It's because they're masters of misdirection! Although they tend to be easily distracted by shiny things. They zoom around in performance vehicles, and model for tuner mags.

Special Power: Rock'n Stop
Favorite RMs: FlashMan, GeminiMan
Fighting Style: Mysticism (inspired by Rose, Chizuru/Maki Kagura, and Chris)
Favorite Games: Need for Speed Underground 1 & 2, Grand Theft Auto, Bejeweled
Dislikes: Turn-based or resource management games
__________

GUARD'N FRESH

A soldier with a big build, and an even bigger voice. Guard'n loves hitting karaoke bars in his time off. And did we mention football? Yeah, he likes macho stuff like that, too. If you hadn't guessed. But he still sleeps by the night light...

Special Power: Rock'n Missile
Favorite RMs: HardMan, CrashMan
Fighting Style: Ikari-influenced Grappling (inspired by Ralf, Clark, Kevin and Abel)
Favorite Games: Ikari Warriors, Karaoke Revolution, Singstar
Dislikes: The dark. And his fear of it, too.
__________

SERF'R BABE

Usually posessing a calm and serene appearance, Serf'R has a vivid connection with nature. She also has a sharp, bitchy, sarcastic wit that catches many off guard. Driven by an undying spirit of adventure and exploration, she alone among the cast is aware of a completely alternative realm...

Special Powers: Rock'n Flood
Favorite RMs: SplashWoman, WaveMan
Fighting Style: Hakkyo-Kuseiken (like Terry, Geese, Kasumi, Jun, or Asuka)
Favorite Games: Aquaria, Metroid, Jables's Adventure
Dislikes: La-Mulana! It's so fun and compelling, but way too hard for her. She doesn't have the patience for it.
__________

GRITZ LEE BURR

A very hairy outdoors enthusiast who loves to hike and camp a lot. Prefers meditiation in solitude, but rarely avoids good company. Under that tough-gruff exterior, he's really a total softie who has a thing for collecting.

Special Power: Rock'n Shield
Fav RMs: WoodMan, SwordMan
Fighting Style: Rolling Crusher (think M. Bison, Blanka, or Duck King)
Favorite Games: The Legend of Zelda, The Indie Game Legend
Dislikes: Noise, urban kids
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« Reply #4 on: March 18, 2011, 01:46:25 PM »

(not pushing character limits... for once?)

FOX'A WUUMIN

A muscular, but still well-proportioned lady with a soft spot for animals and animal rights. Tends to feel more comfortable in fuzzy costumes and accessories for the most part. She's also especially proud of her outlandishly long fingernails. Yet somehow, she can still use a phone with those things!

Special Power: Rock'n Slash
Fav RMs: SlashMan, BladeMan
Fighting Style: Slammaster (like Alex, Maxima, or Tizoc)
Favorite Games: PokeMon, of course! Sonic 2 is a close second, though.
Dislikes: Animal shelters, and the zoo.
__________

DRAG'N SLURR

A cross-dressing "legend in his own mind," Drag'n does have the skills it takes to be a real hero. However, he's easily excited, and tends to get carried away when it comes to swordplay. Or anything competitive, really. If it's one-on-one, he'll take on anybody. And look fabulous doing it!

Special Power: Rock'n Roller
Favorite RMs: KnightMan, TopMan
Fighting Style: Shotokugen Karate (do I really have to spell that out to you guys?)
Favorite Games: Dance Dance Revolution, SF3:3rd Strike, Ninja Gaiden
Dislikes: Sharing the spotlight
__________

OL' COLONEL "POP" CORN

A well-respected leader of the Rock'n Navy, Col. Corn is always committed to doing what's right and just, and upholding good old-fashioned family values. His daughter however, makes this very difficult for him to do! He firmly denies his association with Cap'n Crush to his superiors, claiming their involvement to be more of a rivalry; but he secretly fears for her safety.

Special Power: Rock'n Tracker (think Magnet Missile or Dive Missile)
FavRM: DiveMan
Fighting Style: Slammaster (like King/Armor King, combined with Zangief/Haggar)
Favorite Games: R-Type, Gradius, HydoraH
Dislikes: Injustice! And his daughter's decision-making.
__________

CAP'N CRUSH

A regular Carmen Sandiego, this pretty-looking pirate queen is always hip-deep in mischief. Colonel Corn's nickname "Pop" comes from her, although many have no idea they're actually related. A bit of a daredevil, Crush often has a tendency to throw caution to the wind, and uses her hot appearance to distract others. She can always count on her Pop to save her if all else fails, or at least provide a good distraction while she makes her escape!

Special Powers: Rock'n Blow (Air Shooter)
Fav RMs: PirateMan, AirMan, TornadoMan
Fighting Style: Kyokan Karate (more like Sakura, Yuri, Hinata, Shion, or Kula)
Favorite Games: Kirby's Great Cave Offensive, Scott Pilgrim vs. The World, Where in the World is Carmen Sandiego
Dislikes: Family get-togethers, foofy couples
__________

ROADIE O'CLOWN

Though he's a bit of a prankster, Roadie O's drive in life is to bring joy and positivity to everybody within his range of influence. Unfortunately for him, his peppy attitude and pushy disposition often tend to have a very different effect on others, much to his own dismay.

Special Power: Rock'n Shock
Favorite RMs: SpringMan, ClownMan, RingMan
Fighting Style: Lucha Libre (like El Fuerte, Ramon, Rainbow Mika)
Favorite Games: Adventure, newer Spider-Man games, and GH/RB (drums)
Dislikes: Depression or boredom, loners
__________

There's a few more, but they aren't pictured yet.
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« Reply #5 on: March 18, 2011, 01:50:53 PM »

(not pictured yet)

BOMB'R CHICK

This quirky, upbeat prankster girl loves to surprise others with loud and startling things. Really gets into scary movies. She's a bit too hyper and quick to react to things for her own good. Plus, she's a terrible sport when the joke's on her. Kinda makes her the terrifying one!

Special Power: Rock'n Bomb
Favorite RMs: BombMan, NapalmMan, GrenadeMan
Fighting Style: Heavyweight (?) Wrestling (ala Zangief, Haggar, Tizoc, and King)
Favorite Games: Bomberman, ??
Dislikes: Silence, and the dark.
__________

MR. IMETE

This detective always believes that the devil is in the details. And he pays way too much attention to too many details. As you might expect, the guy's a very OCD neat-freak, and isn't too fond of animals or the outdoors.

Special Power: ??
Favorite RMs: SearchMan, FakeMan
Fighting Style: ??
Favorite Games: NetHack, Diner Dash
Dislikes: Public restooms, sick people.
__________

PAUER D'RANGER

A supposed defender of the innocent, she's very quick to bound into action, and slow to bother with why. She really, really likes to fight too, and will often zone into a fight so much, she'll forget what it's even about! But she's always a team player, regardless of what side she's taken.

Special Power: Rock'n Wave
Favorite RMs: ShadeMan, TenguMan
Fighting Style: (Ninjitsu variant?)
Favorite Games: Most core fighters and Beat 'Em Ups. KoF XI, Guilty Gear Isuka and Scott Pilgrim vs The World (the game), most likely.
Dislikes: Backstabbers. Boredom. Or worse... unskippable cutscenes and tutorial levels!
__________

PV. SNAKE CHARM'R

This tomboyish brat is a bit of a government-conspiracy theorist. And she might be right! She has a tendency to lay low, hide a lot, and disguise herself to get around. Rumor has it she's ex-Special Forces, but has never been deprogrammed. One thing's for sure though; she needs to lay off the smokes! Her manly appearance and raspy voice tend to send the wrong signals sometimes...

Special Power: Rock'n Shock
Fav RMs: SearchMan, SnakeMan
Fighting Style: Yaganagi (typical Kyo/Kusanagi, Iori, Saishu, Shingo stuff)
Favorite Games: Metal Gear Solid, Minecraft
Dislikes: Election years, Jury Duty
__________

LUX'E LAYDI

A fortune-telling visionary, who interestingly enough, likes fortune cookies and gambling. A little too much for her own good, sometimes. Though charming, her attention and imagination tend to wander a lot, and she tends to talk to herself all the time. She doesn't sleep much either for some reason, and fancies herself an "artist," though she doesn't draw, write, or play music particularly well.

Special Powers: Rock'n Ball
Fav. RM: Crystal Man
Fighting Style: Circular Dance (think Momoko, Angel, May Lee, or Noel Vermillion)
Favorite Games: Chrono Trigger, Probability Zero
Dislikes: Scary movies, nightmares
__________

PROFESSOR INNASENSE

An absent-minded scientific genius, determined to make the world a better place, no matter the cost! Of course, his lack of long-term memory frequently leads to slight miscalculations... but the result of those only further provokes his curiousity. He's extremely sharp "in the moment" however, so don't underestimate this wily egghead!

Special Power: ((unknown))
Favorite RM: Personally, he likes the Doctor characters better.
Fighting Style: ((unknown))
Favorite Games: Tetris, WarioWare Inc., Greedy Bankers
Dislikes: Plans going awry
__________

HONOR NIEZE

A hot-tempered Justice of the Peace with a major in Psychology. She has a tendency of finishing other people's sentences, and often jumps to conclusions (based on those) as well, which can sometimes result in distorted facts. Ever so inquizitive, she wonders why others don't get along with her better. She can never resist hot gossip, either.

Special Power: ((unknown))
Fav. RM: Bass
Fighting Style: ((unknown))
Favorite Games: Phoenix Wright: Attorney at Law, The Bad Girls Club
Dislikes: Apologizing or taking anything back she's said, fights or arguments around her
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