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[Pemanent]

Hey I need some quick critique on my pixelz. The feedback thread feels to official for some quick critique.  For a skill based platformer akin to smb. Its supposed to be a ninja fish.

Wall sliding


Basic idle


I'm not sure what to do about the mouth.

[Pemanent]

Oh I missed the workshop thread. I can't delete my own posts apparently. :|

[Goaticide]

He looks fatter sliding down, I get that it's a different angle but his fins don't really show that. The outer fin can probably show less to further push that perspective. The highest red pixel on the wall sliding also seems unnecessary. The bottom one, the side fins look too round and too far down. The tail doesn't look very organic either compared to the rest.

Is this some kind of ninja whale? The back fin of a fish doesn't have that angle. 

[Pemanent]

Thanks for the feedback!

Made some changes. Better?

Moved his fins up on the right one. Put a bit of a shoulder on him. Also moved his fins up one pixel. Shaved down his tail one pixel.
The left one. Pushed his left fin back. Made him skinnier. The part on the top right against the wall is supposed to be his hand / fin.
He looks like a torpedo.

[Pemanent]

Thank you very much Derek. I do apologize.