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« Reply #20 on: October 22, 2008, 12:02:26 PM » |
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western way haiku
not entirely correct
japs count different
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« Reply #21 on: October 22, 2008, 12:29:34 PM » |
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召 悪 我 し い 輩 上 子 は が 供 る を not that it matters a certain variation the rules do allow stop your whining this is just fun and art try to loosen up  |
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« Reply #22 on: October 22, 2008, 12:43:00 PM » |
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i just want to write
haiku all day and all night
i dont want to fight
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« Reply #23 on: October 22, 2008, 02:07:00 PM » |
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Hopping up and down
I yelp very loudly. Why
did I stub my toe?
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« Reply #24 on: October 22, 2008, 02:12:46 PM » |
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Enjoy haiku now,
Without season words in there,
Or the cutting words
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« Reply #25 on: October 22, 2008, 06:18:47 PM » |
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Animal Crossing
It had a haiku one day
Let me recite it
Just one bite won't hurt
yum bite gobble gobble yum
I ate twelve cupcakes
"Let's speak in haiku!"
"No way," said the other guy
"It's too hard for me."
[edit] for content
I thought I'd add more poems
I can't stop writing
School-wide candy ban
What the fudge is going on?
Stick it to the man
Time for bed perhaps?
I can't keep my eyes open
I'll write more later
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« Reply #26 on: October 22, 2008, 07:08:51 PM » |
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Am I doing it right?
because I just learned tonight
what a haiku is
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« Reply #27 on: October 22, 2008, 07:52:38 PM » |
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日本語で is
only four syllables, dude.
unless you count ん
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« Reply #28 on: October 23, 2008, 05:57:16 AM » |
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Am I doing it right?
because I just learned tonight
what a haiku is
That is not correct. The first line of the haiku: it's a bit too long. |
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« Reply #29 on: October 23, 2008, 04:25:46 PM » |
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I mourn the hours
lost to haiku and such.
Go make me a game.
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« Reply #30 on: October 23, 2008, 04:31:11 PM » |
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Am I doing it right?
because I just learned tonight
what a haiku is
That is not correct. The first line of the haiku: it's a bit too long. Oh, sorry, my bad. Instead of the syllables I counted the words. |
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« Reply #31 on: October 23, 2008, 11:18:35 PM » |
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Am I doing it right?
because I just learned tonight
what a haiku is
That is not correct. The first line of the haiku: it's a bit too long. That all depends on if doing is 1 or 2 syllables. |
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« Reply #32 on: October 24, 2008, 12:24:43 AM » |
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Writing haiku is
Like beatnik poetry, only
With rules and order.
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« Reply #33 on: October 24, 2008, 01:13:50 AM » |
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Night, smoky café
Hands beating down on a drum
One man speaks the truth
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« Reply #34 on: October 24, 2008, 01:31:44 AM » |
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Can you hear me now? My loneliness is a lie. Undersupported?  |
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« Reply #35 on: October 24, 2008, 01:41:21 AM » |
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I wrote a haiku
About a beluga whale
On a summer's day
(but some guy who just crap-fake-rapped to the crowd won the prize. lousy aquarium crowds, no sense of artistic value)
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these are from an actual radio shack in the ghetto
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« Reply #36 on: October 24, 2008, 03:17:42 AM » |
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I mourn the hours
lost to haiku and such.
Go make me a game.
Is it really true That the plural of 'haiku' Is also 'haiku'? |
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« Reply #37 on: October 24, 2008, 03:22:02 AM » |
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Spartans, eat hearthy.
Tonight we dine in hell, or
Just purgatory
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« Reply #38 on: October 24, 2008, 03:59:08 AM » |
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Sip my coffee black
Brilliant monitor light
When can I sleep
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« Reply #39 on: October 24, 2008, 06:57:56 AM » |
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Is it really true
That the plural of 'haiku'
Is also 'haiku'?
Singular, plural: In Japanese, all the same. Or so I am told. |
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