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« Reply #20 on: January 16, 2014, 10:59:57 PM »

More logo progress, apparently that square-y one looks stupid so here is the progression of a new logo.








The second last one is my favorite.
Any critique?
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« Reply #21 on: January 18, 2014, 11:16:12 AM »

I like the bottom most one. Slurp them alien brains. It also looks like your drew these in photoshop or illustrator and I don't know if that's what you were going for if you wanted an avatar/logo that portrays pixel art.
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« Reply #22 on: January 18, 2014, 01:10:36 PM »

I did all of these in inkscape, so they are all vector, but I was planning on maybe tracing these with pixel-art. It's just easier to mock-em-up as vector images.

Thanks for your opinion!
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« Reply #23 on: January 20, 2014, 12:56:14 AM »

Taking a break from logo design to do another walk cycle! (hooray.)




Sorry that it's a bit fast!
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« Reply #24 on: January 20, 2014, 01:48:56 AM »

This batch of logos are all triangle inspired. I think.

Colours are WIP but oh well, here I go!



That last one is supposed to be a face. Maybe.
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« Reply #25 on: January 21, 2014, 01:33:20 PM »

These logos just get worse and worse, don't they?



How do you come up with logos! Evil
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« Reply #26 on: January 23, 2014, 06:38:44 PM »

I don't know anything about AA.  Cry
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« Reply #27 on: January 27, 2014, 11:57:55 AM »



Ursula is the best disney character.
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« Reply #28 on: January 27, 2014, 05:12:21 PM »

My two cents on the logo go to the brain smoothie and the one directly above it. The last batch looks a bit 'corporation-y' if that makes sense.
 
For Ursula
      a) this is correct she is the best
      b) you did a gorgeous job pixeling her and
      c) the light source seems a touch off to me? in her hair and chin it looks like the light's coming from the upper right but the highlight on her lip doesn't seem to match it. I don't think reflected light or a secondary light source would make such a strong highlight, especially without one on the right.
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« Reply #29 on: January 27, 2014, 08:47:57 PM »

Thanks, and all points noted!  Smiley

The main thing i was trying to learn from doing the Ursula piece was AA.
I couldn't figure out how to do it on the outline, so I mostly just did the mouth.
I wouldn't have thought AA would be this confusing!  Huh?
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« Reply #30 on: January 27, 2014, 10:18:58 PM »

Ukraine is pretty crazy this time of year!


A few more colours than I would have liked, but more AA practice!  Evil

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forgot to add the reference image! Tongue
http://tn.clashot.com/thumbs/2867529/50653463/thumb_265.jpg
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« Reply #31 on: January 29, 2014, 11:45:41 PM »




Rogue-like armor&dude!
The blue/grey is 3 colours and the gold is more than 3 colours Tongue
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« Reply #32 on: February 06, 2014, 09:52:28 PM »

Continuing on with my new game-in-progress, I got a mock-up!


Is the red text easy enough to read?
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« Reply #33 on: February 07, 2014, 07:40:49 PM »

Okay guys, I need some serious help Beg
For my game, I need a 16x16 silhouette of a hand to represent the glove equipment-slot.
Heres some I came up with but I think that they are all pretty unpleasant.  Sad


Also, while I think the one on the right looks the best, it's too small to actually use.  Facepalm
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