I agree regarding the clarity issues. I'm not sure I would understand this was a movie about overcoming procrastination without reading the description. But I'm not sure how much of that is on me for not "getting" indie films, or cinema in general
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Interesting nonetheless.
hey honestly getting input about the clarity of parts is the most valuable feedback anyone could ask for! it's the hardest thing to figure out when you are so close to the project. no worries about "getting it"
ideally my intent is for things to be enjoyed/understood without thinking too hard about stuff or me "spelling" things out too much either but still giving enough depth to encourage further discussions and (really ideally) repeat viewings.
like anything it's a balance and thoughtful feedback is essential to improving that - thank you for watching it!