This is a prototype for a story-based adventure game.
Please ignore that it's built using RPG Maker with default assets (it's not a JRPG)! I wanted to quickly prove out some concepts and it's the tool I had on hand.
I feel a little exposed sharing it in this early state.
The stages are pretty bare with just enough to get the idea across, so you'll have to use your imagination. But my time investment has been minimal and I need honest feedback.
Windows Download HereIt takes roughly 40 to 90 minutes to complete. Here's the 2 major things I'm looking for:
1) Should I take this game to the next level by remaking it in better engine with original art/music. This would also include improving the writing/dialog and reworking the game flow.
2) If you're an artist, are you interested in working on an expanded remake? I have some ideas on how to reframe the game so that the art is a central feature. It would be completely different from its current top-down perspective or a traditional point and click adventure style.
For feedback, I'd like to know if you understood the story and if you can explain the motivations of the characters by the end. Did you ever feel it was too cheesy or wasting your time? General impressions on how it made you feel, the tone, or any other thoughts would be great! If you get stuck or are confused by stuff, asking questions would be helpful too.
I don't need feedback on bugs or typos, there's probably some minor ones in there. All the art, sound, and music are placeholder, so I'm not looking for feedback there either.
Thanks so much for your time!