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« Reply #8900 on: April 28, 2013, 04:45:56 pm »



Critique, plzthx.

This is among my first "fine art" portraits without a reference, so I sort of made up all the light sources and reflective behaviors. Other than continued rendering, how can I make this more better?

First off, this is really great. First thing I noticed that was off was the nose is a bit less defined than the rest of the face.
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« Reply #8901 on: April 28, 2013, 05:40:10 pm »

[img]http://Critique, plzthx.

This is among my first "fine art" portraits without a reference, so I sort of made up all the light sources and reflective behaviors. Other than continued rendering, how can I make this more better?

First off, this is really great. First thing I noticed that was off was the nose is a bit less defined than the rest of the face.

Thanks, means a lot. Yeah, I always have trouble with noses, since one errant stroke can make it look totally bizarre.

@kinnas, did you paint that in grayscale first?
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« Reply #8902 on: April 28, 2013, 06:54:44 pm »

this is a picture and in many ways it is exactly like an image. Also click makes it bigger!



You wouldn't happen to have this in 1600x900, would you?
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« Reply #8903 on: April 28, 2013, 09:40:15 pm »

this is a picture and in many ways it is exactly like an image. Also click makes it bigger!

-awesome picture-

You wouldn't happen to have this in 1600x900, would you?

I second this request.
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« Reply #8904 on: April 28, 2013, 10:15:03 pm »

Damn nice lighting kinnas.  How much time did you invest in that piece?  Any references used, wingin' it?
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« Reply #8905 on: April 29, 2013, 11:34:51 pm »

this is a picture and in many ways it is exactly like an image. Also click makes it bigger!

-awesome picture-

You wouldn't happen to have this in 1600x900, would you?

I second this request.

Third that
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« Reply #8906 on: April 30, 2013, 02:04:52 am »

monster concept art for my game project.

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« Reply #8907 on: April 30, 2013, 04:14:00 am »

Blambo: Nothing to critique really other than keep going! And don't work on a white background, it's harder to judge values and colour that way.

For those interested here's a larger version of that glowy dark bar - crop, size, rotate etc as necessary! Also notice my embarrassingly sloppy brushwork in great detail.

Much like this next one it was just wingin' it for warmup.


The bar one took about 90 minutes I guess, the last one was like 30-40? It's fast cause I'm not going for anything nor am I thinking about anything, whatever comes out is the topic of the image. If only work stuff was this fast to do : (
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« Reply #8908 on: April 30, 2013, 06:55:28 am »

Making that bar my wallpaper. art that good is very inspiring to lazy artists like me Tongue
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« Reply #8909 on: April 30, 2013, 06:27:34 pm »

Oil on canvas.

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« Reply #8910 on: April 30, 2013, 06:28:39 pm »

Just pencil.

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« Reply #8911 on: April 30, 2013, 06:35:02 pm »

Can't say how much I love that style Carrion, the pen complements your detail as well.

EDIT: whoops, just realised when I looked closer its pencil. wellp, still good details tho  Grin
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« Reply #8912 on: April 30, 2013, 07:06:38 pm »

Can't say how much I love that style Carrion, the pen complements your detail as well.

EDIT: whoops, just realised when I looked closer its pencil. wellp, still good details tho  Grin

Thanks! Here's some more.

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« Reply #8913 on: April 30, 2013, 08:23:52 pm »

bleh first time using a tablet
i'm going to scratch this forest drawing completely and start over
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« Reply #8914 on: May 01, 2013, 12:08:48 am »


Thanks! Here's some more.


Super awesome, in my opinion it would look better with more contrast in the lines to bring out the picture a bit more, I think thats what made me mistake the other one for pen. The darker lines seem to portray the dark demeanor of the character for me.
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« Reply #8915 on: May 01, 2013, 11:15:24 am »




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« Reply #8916 on: May 01, 2013, 11:17:46 am »

Time for some poopy poop poop

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« Reply #8917 on: May 01, 2013, 02:59:08 pm »

Just pencil.

To beat a dead horse, I love your style, carrion. The detail is not necessarily bound to being functional or realistic and adds to the awesomeness.
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« Reply #8918 on: May 01, 2013, 06:11:10 pm »






I really like what you have going on with your practice of the human form. This is solid, keep up the good work man.
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« Reply #8919 on: May 01, 2013, 06:38:55 pm »

Time for some poopy poop poop



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