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« Reply #60 on: December 01, 2015, 09:49:54 AM » |
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Thanks. Here the mother again with the new design : |
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« Reply #61 on: December 01, 2015, 11:10:24 AM » |
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it goes only better from there, although it could be two valid style in choice given the thematic. But the latter is more guarantee a more universal reception that the "Chris Ware" style distanciative of the former, I mean the former fills you with void and coldness from your heart to your bone, brrrrr.  - chris ware - |
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« Reply #62 on: December 02, 2015, 04:49:18 AM » |
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You are making some nice improvements there alfoux!
I would suggest working in her lips into the other expressions (to keep it consistent). Look at pictures of various expressions to get an idea of how the lips stretch and distort. An easy thing to remember is that the lips tend to get thinner (due to being stretched like a rubber band) when the mouth opens.
When I get a bit more time I will through some ideas about color and such your way and see if we cant find new areas for you to rework and explore.
In any case, you're doing great! Keep it up!
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« Reply #63 on: December 03, 2015, 09:10:00 AM » |
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Thanks guys. I really like Chris Ware, more simple but cool. You're right JWK5, I'll try to redesign the lips when the mother talks. Here the father with the new design :  |
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« Reply #64 on: December 04, 2015, 08:23:29 AM » |
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Another one :  |
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« Reply #65 on: December 04, 2015, 08:37:25 AM » |
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They definitely have more character now..
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« Reply #66 on: December 04, 2015, 10:19:03 PM » |
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Thank you.
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« Reply #67 on: December 04, 2015, 11:52:36 PM » |
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I prefer the "void into your souls bleakness" version given the subject, BUT I'M ARTSY FARTSY, it's better not to follow my lead  and it's actually really good that they have character now, it will draw more people. |
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« Reply #68 on: December 06, 2015, 09:43:51 AM » |
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« Reply #69 on: December 09, 2015, 08:49:18 AM » |
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Another characters :   |
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« Reply #70 on: December 15, 2015, 10:07:23 AM » |
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Two new characters :   |
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« Reply #71 on: December 22, 2015, 09:55:17 AM » |
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New character : the teacher |
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« Reply #72 on: December 22, 2015, 11:28:01 AM » |
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These are coming along nicely, Alfoux. Keep up the good work!   |
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« Reply #73 on: December 22, 2015, 09:09:00 PM » |
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Thank you :-)
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« Reply #74 on: January 04, 2016, 11:14:53 AM » |
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New evolution for the tramp : |
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« Reply #75 on: January 13, 2016, 10:51:03 AM » |
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So, I'm trying to improve the colors of the game and I'm not satisfy right now. So which one do you like the more ? |
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« Reply #76 on: January 13, 2016, 03:23:11 PM » |
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what are you trying to achieve?
I prefer the second best due to tone and readability
1+3 are too close to the character's color and contrast range
4 is stealing attention from character and push them back
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« Reply #77 on: January 15, 2016, 06:29:16 AM » |
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I agree with you but I don't know yet whick colors I'll use for the final product. I like the sepia effect. Well, I'll try these colors on the others backgrounds. Before that, another character : the father.  |
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« Reply #78 on: January 27, 2016, 10:51:07 AM » |
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« Reply #79 on: February 01, 2016, 10:39:39 AM » |
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New background : The background without the interface The background with the interface The evolution of the face |
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