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[case81]

Hi,

I'm currently writing a videogame script for my game. It's sci-fi fantasy with a female lead char. The scene outline stands at 39 pages after the first rewrite, including cast list and scenes from quests. I also have assorted bits and pieces, as is probably normal for a game script. You know, logfiles and stuff.

I'm interested in swapping scripts with someone and crit each other's script. Writing buddy style.

I will read and give feedback on anything. I've been writing for 4 years.

Cheers. 

Case81

[ithamore]

What would you like as a sample?

"The neighbors were louder than usual today: fumes screamed into my nostrils..."




Please share a sample of your expectations if you also wish sharing to be reciprocal. Thanks.

[case81]

I would like to exchange my complete videogame script for your complete videogame script and both of us critting (ie giving feedback on) the other's work.

If someone doesn't have a full script, I'm willing to exchange parts, probably using the word number as a rough guideline - if you send me something that has 5000 words, I'll send you a couple thousand words as well.

In the case of a full script or draft exchange, I'm willing to ignore word count. I have critted two scripts that were much longer than mine, but if that means I get qualified feedback on my script, I will do it.

Like I said, I will read anything under the assumption that the other person also reads my stuff.

I'm not sure what your example, ithamore, has to do with videogame scripts.